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Glad I Made The List
i know
you got a lotta dudes
gettin at you
many are called
chosen are few
and even though you can only see me through
your side view mirror
my aim is to become the center of your focus
to get a picture that's clearer
step out the periphery of that convex
you only got a glimpse of me
not the entire context
I'm comin on stronger with desire and respect
lettin my soul reflect with fluidity through my mind
dig a lil deeper and I'm sure
you'll find a treasure trove of love
stashed away inside my chest
surrounded by an icebox
that has begun to melt
cuz something genuine is felt
emanating from you
you're not giving me act one
then act two
what i see is actually you
in all actuality
i think your practicality balances out my passion
the idealist meets the realist
type shit
the realest woman I've ever met
let's make our own reality show
without the camera
no Facebook advertising
let's do this face to face
in quiet places
like late night walks
or a cozy brunch
i gotta hunch
you gonna dig the flow
of my lifestyle
got an extravagant mind
but my heart's a simple place
with space reserved
just for you
let me show you how deep it goes
bathe you in sweet sentiments
even when I'm raunchy
I'm always intimate
willing to stand with you
during inclement weather
we can be tethered like none other
and still feel free to be silly
let's take weekend trips to Philly..
or the Poconos
go horseback riding
cuddle up on cold winter nights
while confiding your dreams and your fears..
whispering sweet nuthins in your ears
come here
sit on my lap
let me cater to that little girl in you
the one who's still full of wonderment
i see you underwent a wonderful transformation
no more interviews with vampires
I'm not here to siphon you
i wanna saturate you
accentuate you
put some glitter on your inner glow
here's a resume of my soul
feel it out
if it's not the right fit
I'll respectfully understand
for i was never entitled for you to grant this wish
i just sincerely wanna say thank you
I'm glad i made the list. ..
and maybe somewhere down the road
you'll have second thoughts
about gettin rid of me
by givin you something
to make you wanna reconsider me
Published 15th Nov 2015
| Edited 15th Jan 2016
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16th Nov 2015 8:11pm
This was amazing Naajir! I never leave your page without being fully satisfied! Your pen is in a league of its own.
I can't even point out my favorite lines; brilliancy in its entirety. Love this.....
I can't even point out my favorite lines; brilliancy in its entirety. Love this.....
19th Nov 2015 11:07am
20th Nov 2015 3:48am
22nd Nov 2015 1:19pm
This... just... Wow! This piece is amazing! It planted a smile in my heart that blossomed on my lips. I am so in awe of your talent! Your words seem to flow so smoothly, you should have no problem convincing her, because you certainly charmed me!
Great work!
Great work!
This is probably the most romantic love poem I have ever read.in my entire life.Please stand up and take a bow Naajir this is breathtaking, fluid and ) ) ) ) !
You made me cry, absolutely without a doubt my favorite from you thus far...
wow... you're so deep....
Beautifully stunning...
Jackie X
RL
come here <<<<
sit on my lap <<<<<< I swear I could almost see your face... your are something else!
let me cater to that little girl in you
the one who's still full of wonderment
i see you underwent a wonderful transformation
no more interviews with vampires
I'm not here to siphon you
i wanna saturate you
accentuate you
put some glitter on your inner glow
here's a resume of my soul
Beautiful
You made me cry, absolutely without a doubt my favorite from you thus far...
wow... you're so deep....
Beautifully stunning...
Jackie X
RL
come here <<<<
sit on my lap <<<<<< I swear I could almost see your face... your are something else!
let me cater to that little girl in you
the one who's still full of wonderment
i see you underwent a wonderful transformation
no more interviews with vampires
I'm not here to siphon you
i wanna saturate you
accentuate you
put some glitter on your inner glow
here's a resume of my soul
Beautiful
4th Nov 2018 7:17am
