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Flew
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Flew away
made the shadows of flight
against the wall
till sleep had me falling
where I wanted to be
with you again
Flew away
made the shadows of flight
against the wall
till sleep had me falling
where I wanted to be
with you again
Published 14th Nov 2015
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This made me think of dreams and how sometimes you would rather sleep a little bit longer rather than face the reality you know. I especially liked the line "till sleep had me falling" that was nice. Great write!
15th Nov 2015 5:36am
15th Nov 2015 10:11am
We all see the things, places, or people we miss most in our dreams. To wake upfront their arms is the hardest moment of every day. A great way of saying just that.
15th Nov 2015 10:16am
15th Nov 2015 10:32am
Makes me feel like I'm laying in bed thinking of that certain someone.
15th Nov 2015 1:56pm
