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Chapel Of Love
He who roams the woods at night
travels in shadows with birds of flight.
His abode's a place condemned
an abbey of yore that's overwhelmed.
Blood and gore he's seen it all
he stood through his kingdom's fall.
For now he lurks in caves beneath
long buried his blade and sheath.
Lightning bolts on moonless night
set the valley and woods alight.
He hath no feeling for human plight
for him it's just a beautiful sight.
Not even a blink for loss of reign
loss of love his source of pain.
His queen, vanished without a trace
when the enemy stormed her place.
His quest for her has made him a beast
suffering of beings he feels the least.
For her he built a chapel of love
corpses on floor her portrait above!
© 2015 KDAmB
Published 12th Nov 2015
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16th Nov 2015 9:23pm
5th Dec 2015 4:27pm
19th Nov 2015 8:16pm
Love the way the title really works giving a poem that unexpected feel - well written, fascinating rhyming scheme - held my solid to it until the very end :-)
such a good write :-)
such a good write :-)
19th Nov 2015 11:10pm
Thank You Dave!! for your kind words and appreciation
.... such praise from a poet like you truly means a lot!!
.... such praise from a poet like you truly means a lot!!
28th Nov 2015 8:16am
chapel in the underground, for love & revenge.
it's a very lucid imagining...
it's a very lucid imagining...
5th Dec 2015 4:26pm
John, I thank you for your kind words.. feel honored to hear that! :)
Cheers
KDAmB
Cheers
KDAmB
3rd Jun 2016 3:36pm
This alone.., took has stolen away
many my breaths:
[Lightning bolts on moonless night
set the valley and woods alight.
He hath no feeling for human plight
for him it's just a beautiful sight.
Not even a blink for loss of reign
loss of love his source of pain.
His queen, vanished without a trace
when the enemy stormed her place. ]
Really? my gosh this whole damn
piece has stained me. How beautifully
intruding.
-Howlings
many my breaths:
[Lightning bolts on moonless night
set the valley and woods alight.
He hath no feeling for human plight
for him it's just a beautiful sight.
Not even a blink for loss of reign
loss of love his source of pain.
His queen, vanished without a trace
when the enemy stormed her place. ]
Really? my gosh this whole damn
piece has stained me. How beautifully
intruding.
-Howlings
3rd Jun 2016 3:42pm
Aww MsWhelms...
you're so generous in your praise!
I am lost for words to thank you! Appreciate your compliment as well as your visit!
Thank You! :-)
KDAmB
you're so generous in your praise!
I am lost for words to thank you! Appreciate your compliment as well as your visit!
Thank You! :-)
KDAmB
