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Yaaaawn. I know growing up is a fairly essential process, and there was once a point when a week long relationship would come to an end, and all would claim it to be the end of the world, but for Christ's sake! But then, if you are playing in the company of people who might just have experienced things a tad more strenuous than young 'love'
You exist in a world of the bereaved, starved, raped, insane and the genuinely tormented. A ________! A frickin' ________, and you start jabbering on about this 'love' word. I don't think I notice ________s any more, they just mark a period when I get some money for working and over the period it disappears and as a result my general physical and mental health deteriorates.
Just live! Stop watching the television telling you what you should be doing without you realising it. It's all crap. Go sit down next to an alcoholic busker with a few teeth left and ask him about his life.
But, under no circumstances, come on to a poetry site and start asking questions, which, by merely forming them you answer them, in a way that makes anybody delicate enough to answer you look like a dick. Okay, okay. It's nice to help with problems, but let's start by establishing what a problem is! This is not one.
Break up with him, stay with him, go out and wait outside a busy down trodden bar dressed like a slut, and ask the drunks if they can show you a good time. Whatever, it doesn't matter. You could do anything, all it will do at the moment is feel like something it isn't until later on when you should start asking for advice.
Anyhow, I have urgent matters of thirst to deal with. Ta ra.
You exist in a world of the bereaved, starved, raped, insane and the genuinely tormented. A ________! A frickin' ________, and you start jabbering on about this 'love' word. I don't think I notice ________s any more, they just mark a period when I get some money for working and over the period it disappears and as a result my general physical and mental health deteriorates.
Just live! Stop watching the television telling you what you should be doing without you realising it. It's all crap. Go sit down next to an alcoholic busker with a few teeth left and ask him about his life.
But, under no circumstances, come on to a poetry site and start asking questions, which, by merely forming them you answer them, in a way that makes anybody delicate enough to answer you look like a dick. Okay, okay. It's nice to help with problems, but let's start by establishing what a problem is! This is not one.
Break up with him, stay with him, go out and wait outside a busy down trodden bar dressed like a slut, and ask the drunks if they can show you a good time. Whatever, it doesn't matter. You could do anything, all it will do at the moment is feel like something it isn't until later on when you should start asking for advice.
Anyhow, I have urgent matters of thirst to deal with. Ta ra.
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