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Stammering Streetlight...
opened a text saying her alchemy
is best with me,
I come over to discover
her lying with her head
at foot of the bed,
I snatch off the covers
provoking my promiscuous particles
already stripped of all articles
of her clothes
my instrument she ingests
as my maracas rest
on her nose
my expanding erection evolves
the room revolves
180 degrees
I slurp from her belly
to her royal jelly
amidst moans and muffled pleas
we realign and reunite,
filaments from a flickering streetlight
irradiate the beholders
making an adjustment
her legs and lust pent
by my shoulders
soup splatters while I impale
my flesh under her fingernails
overhear my name prance
spouted so special
as the voluptuous vessel
premieres a majestic rain dance...
is best with me,
I come over to discover
her lying with her head
at foot of the bed,
I snatch off the covers
provoking my promiscuous particles
already stripped of all articles
of her clothes
my instrument she ingests
as my maracas rest
on her nose
my expanding erection evolves
the room revolves
180 degrees
I slurp from her belly
to her royal jelly
amidst moans and muffled pleas
we realign and reunite,
filaments from a flickering streetlight
irradiate the beholders
making an adjustment
her legs and lust pent
by my shoulders
soup splatters while I impale
my flesh under her fingernails
overhear my name prance
spouted so special
as the voluptuous vessel
premieres a majestic rain dance...
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Re. Stammering Streetlight...
Anonymous
7th Nov 2015 8:12pm
"my instrument she ingests
as my maracas rest
on her nose" . . . Gotta love it!!!
Quite a lively sexual dance with the variations
of lust are apparent and welcomed.
as my maracas rest
on her nose" . . . Gotta love it!!!
Quite a lively sexual dance with the variations
of lust are apparent and welcomed.
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Re. Stammering Streetlight...
7th Nov 2015 8:30pm
Re. Stammering Streetlight...
Anonymous
7th Nov 2015 9:04pm
You're quite welcomed, Dean.
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Re. Stammering Streetlight...
7th Nov 2015 9:05pm
....jeez louise! You're killin' a sista' with that sexy pen of yours....
"provoking my promiscuous particles
already stripped of all articles
of her clothes
my instrument she ingests
as my maracas rest
on her nose"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I slurp from her belly
to her royal jelly
amidst moans and muffled pleas
we realign and reunite,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Entire poem was so freaking sensual and such a skin blusher, but I love those two stanzas pointed out the most, and lordy lordy the last one just sealed the deal.
"spouted so special
as the voluptuous vessel
premieres a majestic rain dance..."
"provoking my promiscuous particles
already stripped of all articles
of her clothes
my instrument she ingests
as my maracas rest
on her nose"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I slurp from her belly
to her royal jelly
amidst moans and muffled pleas
we realign and reunite,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Entire poem was so freaking sensual and such a skin blusher, but I love those two stanzas pointed out the most, and lordy lordy the last one just sealed the deal.
"spouted so special
as the voluptuous vessel
premieres a majestic rain dance..."
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Re: Re. Stammering Streetlight...
14th Nov 2015 9:14pm
Re. Stammering Streetlight...
8th Nov 2015 3:33pm
Dean you're a master writer of all genres but I could just lick your mind on the erotica..
with lines like this..
"I slurp from her belly
to her royal jelly
amidst moans and muffled pleas
we realign and reunite,
filaments from a flickering streetlight
irradiate the beholders
making an adjustment
her legs and lust pent
by my shoulders
soup splatters while I impale"
beautifully done hot, hot, hot write..
love Crim
with lines like this..
"I slurp from her belly
to her royal jelly
amidst moans and muffled pleas
we realign and reunite,
filaments from a flickering streetlight
irradiate the beholders
making an adjustment
her legs and lust pent
by my shoulders
soup splatters while I impale"
beautifully done hot, hot, hot write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Stammering Streetlight...
14th Nov 2015 9:20pm
after comments like the one you left, lol, lick away Crim... lick away...thanx babygirl...
Re. Stammering Streetlight...
Anonymous
8th Nov 2015 6:25pm
Dean..this is dripping with lust..hot erotic sensual chemistry... beautifully conveyed.
Damn, your talent is amazing, you can tackle any genre effortlessly.
Damn, your talent is amazing, you can tackle any genre effortlessly.
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Re: Re. Stammering Streetlight...
14th Nov 2015 9:24pm
im glad you liked this, i hold your comments in high esteem, your words are as beautiful as your vessel, thanx for stopping by Vee...
Re. Stammering Streetlight...
9th Nov 2015 1:24pm
Maracas? - lmaooooo!
This was delicious Dean. i agree with Vee, excellent sensual chemistry here.
This was delicious Dean. i agree with Vee, excellent sensual chemistry here.
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Re: Re. Stammering Streetlight...
14th Nov 2015 9:27pm
hey mami! lol i glad you enjoyed... maracas was a last second edit, may have went a different way if i wasn't rushing, thanx for reading and commenting Lena...
Re. Stammering Streetlight...
11th Nov 2015 3:47am
oh delicious Dean, you are forever increasing your erotic nature to perfection.
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Re: Re. Stammering Streetlight...
14th Nov 2015 9:29pm