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we should write our own love story
Hearing your voice
I had to pinch myself to keep from smiling
The shiver you sent down my spine
It was like a breathe of fresh air
Im walking on the beach the mist of the ocean spraying my hair
Like the most beautiful sunset
Or the first drops of rain the calm of the storm
Hearing your voice and feeling at ease
It isnt something that happens often to me
Thinking out lloud maybe we should write our own love story.
I had to pinch myself to keep from smiling
The shiver you sent down my spine
It was like a breathe of fresh air
Im walking on the beach the mist of the ocean spraying my hair
Like the most beautiful sunset
Or the first drops of rain the calm of the storm
Hearing your voice and feeling at ease
It isnt something that happens often to me
Thinking out lloud maybe we should write our own love story.
Published 5th Nov 2015
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5th Nov 2015 4:06pm
"Thinking out loud maybe we should write our own love story."
~love this line, the idea so tingly-perfect!
missin your pen & gettin bk as much as possible.. soo glad I caught you and this jewel ladyluv!
you've captured the thrill plus ease of that One's voice sweetly..
hugs n fancy wishes
~d
~love this line, the idea so tingly-perfect!
missin your pen & gettin bk as much as possible.. soo glad I caught you and this jewel ladyluv!
you've captured the thrill plus ease of that One's voice sweetly..
hugs n fancy wishes
~d
5th Nov 2015 10:30pm
hugs ive had a block for a while trying to get back will catch up on your work as well :) glad it was enjoyed
