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Saving Suzanna
I’m naked
Standing in front of you
Letting you suck
On my nipples
Soft and then urgent
Running your tongue
Around the vulnerable
Pink
Until I can’t take it anymore
Blissfully anguished
Your sugary tongue
Suffusing a delicate blush
In my dewy, feminine petals
Spread me open
Wet and aching
I desperately need you to touch me
And I wait…..
While you bury your face
Between my breasts
I wait....
For you to fill me
Enter my womb
I wait….
For you to remember
That you loved me once
And you can love me again
Or you fuck me
Until I forget
That love has nothing to do with this.
Standing in front of you
Letting you suck
On my nipples
Soft and then urgent
Running your tongue
Around the vulnerable
Pink
Until I can’t take it anymore
Blissfully anguished
Your sugary tongue
Suffusing a delicate blush
In my dewy, feminine petals
Spread me open
Wet and aching
I desperately need you to touch me
And I wait…..
While you bury your face
Between my breasts
I wait....
For you to fill me
Enter my womb
I wait….
For you to remember
That you loved me once
And you can love me again
Or you fuck me
Until I forget
That love has nothing to do with this.
Published 3rd Nov 2015
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3rd Nov 2015 8:10pm
I could taste the words dripping from your pussy as I read this. ᵐʸ ᶫᵒʳᵈ ...................
3rd Nov 2015 10:48pm
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2015 10:24pm
Suzanne, this is a luscious erotic write.. nice flow, and beautiful imagery.. well done.. welcome to DU.. with respect..
Dave
Dave
3rd Nov 2015 10:47pm
Mmm, very very nice kitten! And yes..welcome!
Your sugary tongue
Suffusing a delicate blush
In my dewy, feminine petals
Spread me open
Wet and aching
I desperately need you to touch me
And I wait…..
Love that bit the most.
Jennifer
Your sugary tongue
Suffusing a delicate blush
In my dewy, feminine petals
Spread me open
Wet and aching
I desperately need you to touch me
And I wait…..
Love that bit the most.
Jennifer
Anonymous
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4th Nov 2015 4:18am
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2015 5:34am
With this volcanic piece, it seems like you know your way around erotic literature.
Regardless of that, it was more fun to read...twice!
Welcome to the DU
hope to see more!
Regardless of that, it was more fun to read...twice!
Welcome to the DU
hope to see more!
4th Nov 2015 3:46pm
I made the mistake of reading this in the morning...and now it is going to be a long hard day.
Ok, stupid innuendos aside on my part, this is a wonderful write, I feel the desire and passion in it, the longing...and then it gets deeper, the longing for more or the need to forget the longing for more with the fulfillment of the more basic longing. Your poem says it better, but I definitely relate to this. This describes things I have desired in similar situations. A beautiful, steamy write with depth.
Ok, stupid innuendos aside on my part, this is a wonderful write, I feel the desire and passion in it, the longing...and then it gets deeper, the longing for more or the need to forget the longing for more with the fulfillment of the more basic longing. Your poem says it better, but I definitely relate to this. This describes things I have desired in similar situations. A beautiful, steamy write with depth.
Anonymous
4th Nov 2015 9:30pm
soulofsuzanne,
Like one of those slow bottles of ketchup....anticipation comes to mind. But, then once the seal is broken.....LoL. Loved the last 3 lines ;-)
Welcome to DU!
tornado
Like one of those slow bottles of ketchup....anticipation comes to mind. But, then once the seal is broken.....LoL. Loved the last 3 lines ;-)
Welcome to DU!
tornado
15th Mar 2016 4:57am
your poem goes beyond the sex of it:
we want this to be love, & we want love to be this.
extraordinary...
we want this to be love, & we want love to be this.
extraordinary...
