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Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
This woman,
born of breadth
n bone...
So many look
yet so few ever see
She's mared by betrayal
n' a hurt she's never shone...
An immaculate beauty
sowed into her depth
sparklin' in her love
with every breath
A child, a mother
a wife, a life, undone
The mother, the wife
where had the husband, their
family unity gone?
Pain, to disillusionment
looks like the darkness' won...
Though, she is no easy win
no, her fight for her dreams, joy
n' love ever drive her 'north wind'
towards a heaven, that miraculous
n' dreamed reality, which nurtures
her soul to just keep on goin...'
born of breadth
n bone...
So many look
yet so few ever see
She's mared by betrayal
n' a hurt she's never shone...
An immaculate beauty
sowed into her depth
sparklin' in her love
with every breath
A child, a mother
a wife, a life, undone
The mother, the wife
where had the husband, their
family unity gone?
Pain, to disillusionment
looks like the darkness' won...
Though, she is no easy win
no, her fight for her dreams, joy
n' love ever drive her 'north wind'
towards a heaven, that miraculous
n' dreamed reality, which nurtures
her soul to just keep on goin...'
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Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 5:57pm
Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 8:45pm
Aaawww... Well if it is, I pray you're
still a believer in dreams :) thank u my friend, honored by your fast growing support :)
still a believer in dreams :) thank u my friend, honored by your fast growing support :)
Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 6:40pm
I'm sure this ink can be complimented by many women who wear the same red bottom jimmy choo shoes as the lady in this poem. What I love most about this ink, is that the ended gave hope a voice. Beautiful ink, Rich!
Pen Salute~
Pen Salute~
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Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 8:48pm
Astute as ever my sweet Rain
it is indeed meant to help inspire
those to hold on to hope... :)
Deeply grateful for your thoughts n support always :)
it is indeed meant to help inspire
those to hold on to hope... :)
Deeply grateful for your thoughts n support always :)
Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 8:31pm
Poe what a loving, tender ink this is giving hope to any woman walking this path..
beautiful..
love Crim
beautiful..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 8:49pm
Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 8:40pm
Id love to meet said lady in your poem. She sounds fabulous even if innocently flawed. Loved it and its in my list. <3
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Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 8:51pm
I'm soooooo honored you added this to your list! Thank u! N yea me too! lol
Seriously, this was based on a number of women I know (sisters) n surmise
I understand based on their voiced thoughts on many pieces I've read... Truly appreciate you my dear friend :)
Seriously, this was based on a number of women I know (sisters) n surmise
I understand based on their voiced thoughts on many pieces I've read... Truly appreciate you my dear friend :)
Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
22nd Oct 2015 11:18pm
So many look
yet so few ever see *sigh*
I know this scenario, personally...
Great write, even better read!
yet so few ever see *sigh*
I know this scenario, personally...
Great write, even better read!
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Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
23rd Oct 2015 00:38am
Aaawww I'm sorry you know that scenario... I'm sure it's not a good feelin... But you comment made me feel good so thank u so much! I really appreciate it :)
Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
23rd Oct 2015 1:43pm
Oh PM this is such a thing of beauty. Your soft n caring side is truly exposed n this write.
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Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
23rd Oct 2015 2:11pm
WOW... It back!! Hi my sweet lil southern one :) thank u, guess I got lucky when thinking bout my sisters (primarily) n all those pieces that humbled around in my head n poof! This happened lol... appreciate u so much sweetie :)
Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
24th Oct 2015 2:10am
You show something so gentle and genuine here for a woman to never give up hope. Beautiful; )
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Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
5th Nov 2015 6:22pm
My sweetness, you are a doll I hope you that... Thank you for always blessing me with your support :)
Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2016 11:37am
This purely delicious and
still punctures the soul
and heart.
I not even gonna spill my guts here.
just know all is touched
still punctures the soul
and heart.
I not even gonna spill my guts here.
just know all is touched
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Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
23rd Feb 2016 2:04pm
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Re: Re. Woman, For all she'll ever Be...
27th Jul 2016 9:30am
Well, I thank you muchly! :) truly n always honored n grateful for the support of my work :)