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Motive...what motive?
Motive
Who needs a motive?
More importantly
Who needs a motive to kill, torture, rape, pillage and loot
Sure give a reason
It'll fall on deaf ears
and give a few family members peace of mind
While you stay in a straight jacket
Or orange pj's
Think of nature itself
Does a hyena need to explain to a lion why it stole the lions meal?
Does a crocodile have to explain why it attacks buffalo at the waterhole?
Does a monkey explain why it stole from a human?
No!
Yet when its a people crime
There must be reason
A crime of passion
Greed
Lust
Pure hatred
Poverty
Something!
Anything!
Please we want a motive!
In short
Why do we need a reason?
Here's a reason
It's in our nature
To kill
Steal
Fuck
and deceive
So motive...what motive?
There is none
Who needs a motive?
More importantly
Who needs a motive to kill, torture, rape, pillage and loot
Sure give a reason
It'll fall on deaf ears
and give a few family members peace of mind
While you stay in a straight jacket
Or orange pj's
Think of nature itself
Does a hyena need to explain to a lion why it stole the lions meal?
Does a crocodile have to explain why it attacks buffalo at the waterhole?
Does a monkey explain why it stole from a human?
No!
Yet when its a people crime
There must be reason
A crime of passion
Greed
Lust
Pure hatred
Poverty
Something!
Anything!
Please we want a motive!
In short
Why do we need a reason?
Here's a reason
It's in our nature
To kill
Steal
Fuck
and deceive
So motive...what motive?
There is none
Published 17th Oct 2015
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17th Oct 2015 7:42am
Highway..you always make me think..
But see doll..human beings have free will and a conscience. So the animal argument doesnt hold strong. Well fed sharks can live in a tank in an aquarium full of grooper and never make a kill.
Unless you are a psychopath or sociopath you kinda do need a motive to do things that repulse the average person to think about doing to someone.
A creepy write..thats one of your more developed more focused pieces. Because i dont agree with your logic in any way...doesnt mean its not a good piece. But do worry about you as a human being if you dont see its flaw.
Usually the motive behind those things are primal..base
.and fucked up..but motive.
Good poem
Jennifer
But see doll..human beings have free will and a conscience. So the animal argument doesnt hold strong. Well fed sharks can live in a tank in an aquarium full of grooper and never make a kill.
Unless you are a psychopath or sociopath you kinda do need a motive to do things that repulse the average person to think about doing to someone.
A creepy write..thats one of your more developed more focused pieces. Because i dont agree with your logic in any way...doesnt mean its not a good piece. But do worry about you as a human being if you dont see its flaw.
Usually the motive behind those things are primal..base
.and fucked up..but motive.
Good poem
Jennifer
17th Oct 2015 9:00am
You worry about me as a human. I propose to you this perhaps I'm more human than others because I embrace my primal instincts. That having a motive is something constructed by people to better understand criminals.
Regarding animals it still does hold strong as your argument is about a creatures in captivity which does not accurately represent nature itself. Regarding free will one could argue that it is an illusion. How much free will do we really have? But I always appreciate your feedback
Regarding animals it still does hold strong as your argument is about a creatures in captivity which does not accurately represent nature itself. Regarding free will one could argue that it is an illusion. How much free will do we really have? But I always appreciate your feedback
