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your silent smile...
.
I want to
wake up everyday
laying next to you
I want to
be the first thing you see
and the reason for your morning smile
watching you wake up next to me
I say good morning beautiful
with my morning breathe
you wrinkle your nose
with a silent smile
you take my hand,
roll over and pull me in
I kiss your neck and
hold you tight
and you say
good morning baby
I silently smile
I will
.
I want to
wake up everyday
laying next to you
I want to
be the first thing you see
and the reason for your morning smile
watching you wake up next to me
I say good morning beautiful
with my morning breathe
you wrinkle your nose
with a silent smile
you take my hand,
roll over and pull me in
I kiss your neck and
hold you tight
and you say
good morning baby
I silently smile
I will
.
Published 16th Oct 2015
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8th Aug 2017 2:33am
i felt the first stanza was not needed. The organization of this poem is interesting, beginning with a stated dream and then a detailed observation of that dream.
10th Aug 2017 4:41am
