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the Akashic vault
I met in the parking lot
two maggots fighting for Indian take out
two gladiators
primitive
their hands equipped with brass knuckles
they carved supernovas in each other's jawbones and eye sockets
souls spasm in the spectacle of incarnation
round after round
stars implode
comets camouflage their jabs and uppercuts in trails of icy Sanskrit
our universe KO'd in cosmic Nirvana
two maggots endlessly reborn
fighting for Indian take out.
two maggots fighting for Indian take out
two gladiators
primitive
their hands equipped with brass knuckles
they carved supernovas in each other's jawbones and eye sockets
souls spasm in the spectacle of incarnation
round after round
stars implode
comets camouflage their jabs and uppercuts in trails of icy Sanskrit
our universe KO'd in cosmic Nirvana
two maggots endlessly reborn
fighting for Indian take out.
Published 12th Oct 2015
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12th Oct 2015 7:19am
armies like to believe that the prize is worth the war.
intriguing write...
intriguing write...
12th Oct 2015 7:40am
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9th Jan 2016 9:01am
This probably is far from where you were going but the term maggots makes me think of a scene from Lord Of The Rings, where orcs are arguing over the captured Hobbits.
The larger, universe direct terms suggest a beauty in the world's order contrasted with more mundane tension.
The larger, universe direct terms suggest a beauty in the world's order contrasted with more mundane tension.
13th Jan 2016 9:01am
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20th Aug 2017 5:29am
Wow, you actually encapsulated this perfectly with my inspiration at the time. Thank you so much for the read through.
