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S THREE
S THREE
Most Adults Don’t Ever
Affect
Deep Empathy. Consequently, If Such Insensitive Operations Nix
The Ocular
Truths, Unruly Results Neatly
Occur. Until Reaching
Wakefulness, I Lived Loose
And Never Did
Once Understand Real
Life. I Veritably Enjoyed Sinning.
One Vile Existence. Returning
To Om,
The Heavenly Entity
Caromed Around. Reaching Ever
Out. Finally
Giving Obedience, Deep
Acceptance Seemed
Way Easier.
Under New Direction, Entire Realms Seemed To Open Outward. Delivering
His Important Message.
Jarl Slind Oct 8 2015
Most Adults Don’t Ever
Affect
Deep Empathy. Consequently, If Such Insensitive Operations Nix
The Ocular
Truths, Unruly Results Neatly
Occur. Until Reaching
Wakefulness, I Lived Loose
And Never Did
Once Understand Real
Life. I Veritably Enjoyed Sinning.
One Vile Existence. Returning
To Om,
The Heavenly Entity
Caromed Around. Reaching Ever
Out. Finally
Giving Obedience, Deep
Acceptance Seemed
Way Easier.
Under New Direction, Entire Realms Seemed To Open Outward. Delivering
His Important Message.
Jarl Slind Oct 8 2015
Published 9th Oct 2015
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9th Oct 2015 2:14pm
The words definitely have meaning, but I am lost at several times as to why you aren't ending sentences on the same line. Maybe I am too much of a traditionalist. Just feels like you are conveying something that I don't get at the moment
10th Oct 2015 12:49pm
There is a reason, if not a rhyme. Thank you for your interest and time my friend.
