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autumnal
the air is damp
and redolent
of yellow leaves
and flying scraps
of this and that...
the sediment
that one retrieves -
"oh but keep it
under your hat..!"
her sleeves
around my neck
are wet
in the breeze
like the sail
of a wreck
and I sneeze
as they flap...
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Re. autumnal
6th Oct 2015 3:54am
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Re. autumnal
6th Oct 2015 4:24am
Stunning, Paul. The imagery is so profound I heard the wet fabric in the wind.
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6th Oct 2015 10:27pm
thanks very much -
there's nothing wetter than a wet sleeve
dripping down your back..:)
there's nothing wetter than a wet sleeve
dripping down your back..:)
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Anonymous
6th Oct 2015 6:11am
*brilliant*...
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6th Oct 2015 10:29pm
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6th Oct 2015 10:31pm
I don't know what to say..!
(trust me, this isn't unusual..:)
thank you, very much, Lobo...
(trust me, this isn't unusual..:)
thank you, very much, Lobo...
Re. autumnal
6th Oct 2015 2:57pm
A very vivid tribute to the many aspects of Autumn!
This time of year, there are those days, when both wind and rain seem to engage in a real battle....challenging one another....to prove their capabilities in causing "difficulties" for outside activities! Can really f e e l the elements in this piece!
Soo Creatively Crafted, mo Chara!!
This time of year, there are those days, when both wind and rain seem to engage in a real battle....challenging one another....to prove their capabilities in causing "difficulties" for outside activities! Can really f e e l the elements in this piece!
Soo Creatively Crafted, mo Chara!!
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6th Oct 2015 10:34pm
thanks, Enchantress...
autumn is like dancing
before the winter police come
and shut the place down..:)
autumn is like dancing
before the winter police come
and shut the place down..:)
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