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Sunk
The unsinkable
Has sunk
Into my gut.
The realization...
The truth...
Is in front
Now
Is inside
Now.
Time to evolve,
Or curl up
Give up
On all of it.
Has sunk
Into my gut.
The realization...
The truth...
Is in front
Now
Is inside
Now.
Time to evolve,
Or curl up
Give up
On all of it.
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Re. Sunk
3rd Oct 2015 5:41pm
Looloolookie , my sweet girl. I hear
this shouting from your heart.
Need not give up on everything,
just on what you know cannot
be changed. New beginning only
come from the end of something
else. Here's to new beginnings 🍻
Keith
this shouting from your heart.
Need not give up on everything,
just on what you know cannot
be changed. New beginning only
come from the end of something
else. Here's to new beginnings 🍻
Keith
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Re: Re. Sunk
4th Oct 2015 3:06am
Thanks Keith, I wish this one didn't come as quickly to me as it did. You are totally correct in celebrating new beginnings! Will do.
Re. Sunk
3rd Oct 2015 6:19pm
Re: Re. Sunk
4th Oct 2015 3:07am
Re. Sunk
3rd Oct 2015 7:50pm
That sinking feeling is hard to shake. You show some hope in the last stanza, Lookie. You're evolving, not giving up. You're a survivor heading back for the surface. This is a fine and extremely powerful write. Well done!
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Re: Re. Sunk
4th Oct 2015 3:08am
Thank you so much Mr.C, I'm glad you felt the power of emotion in this. And yes, we must evolve or we just won't make it! Loves.
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Re: Re. Sunk
4th Oct 2015 3:54am
Your support means the world Taryn. THE WORLD. I know I'm a very powerful woman. Just sometimes, I forget. Loves.
Re. Sunk
Anonymous
4th Oct 2015 6:31am
Miss LooLoo, my dear, never give up on love. . .it's just a part of being grown~up. . .it sucks, I know. . .xo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Sunk
4th Oct 2015 7:33am
Haha, sucks ass! I should know better in my 42 years....but it still fucks me over!
Re. Sunk
I needed to read this "Time to evolve." To curl up would be like the rose bud that never opens. Spread your petals wide! Receive the light that feeds your beautiful blossom.
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Re: Re. Sunk
8th Oct 2015 2:27am