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A Haoku
beak
water
Mars
Is It So Hard To Imagine?
For more info about a haoku see: http://www.thethreenounpoemblog.wordpress.com
water
Mars
Is It So Hard To Imagine?
For more info about a haoku see: http://www.thethreenounpoemblog.wordpress.com
Published 30th Sep 2015
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Candy Man
Only thing that cums to mind is that alien being in japan that lives in rivers and pulls children in. 4 feet tall. Beak. Amphibious (water) and has a plate on his head. Water must remain in plate or certain dried up death. He can talk, and play a mean banjo.
The Capa
Or naybe i check out the blog
Oh! And maybe he cums from Mars
💋Jen
Only thing that cums to mind is that alien being in japan that lives in rivers and pulls children in. 4 feet tall. Beak. Amphibious (water) and has a plate on his head. Water must remain in plate or certain dried up death. He can talk, and play a mean banjo.
The Capa
Or naybe i check out the blog
Oh! And maybe he cums from Mars
💋Jen
30th Sep 2015 3:08pm
Recently in the news there was mention of finding water on Mars. I thought maybe a bird too was hiding there somewhere taking sips of the water. Hence the haoku, a form I invented (similar to a haiku) that tries to say the most in the very least way using only nouns. Thanks for your interest and Japan story,
30th Sep 2015 8:37pm
30th Sep 2015 10:58pm
Yeah. In another poem I called it "a desert peace." Thanks for honoring the haoku with a RL entry.
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30th Sep 2015 10:25pm
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