Labyrinth

Good layout
Good reading xD

thank you kindly Rose :)

with love Crim

intense internal struggle on display... i knew you would come out on top...

thank you graciously Dean :)

with love Crimsin

Brenda, this is so powerful.. and brilliantly done.. really dig the imagery.. with love..

P.S. love the ending better with the change.. Great ink..



Dave

thank you Dave you always make me smile :)

love Brenda

Can I bitch slap that voice that says you're not a good enough writer? Cause that's what that voice deserves. A good bitch-slappin'.

<3

Harlie I just may need you to do that ;)

thank you lovely one..

with love Crim

This poem makes me think about when I used to cut myself

Kavik I'm glad you ink it out instead of cutting now..

thank you for visiting my page..

love Brenda

I can relate to this deeply. You are fuckin awesome, Crim. <3

thank you graciously lovely lady :)

with love Crim

ohhhh....so full of self-torture brenda...a lust for it...and your glourious end!

thank you Shauna for getting this write :)

love Brenda

That's quite a wise ending.  It's all too easy to sabotage oneself with "negative self-talk" doing damage creatively and emotionally.  I hope you achieve that freedom you mention in the next-to-last stanza.  You seem pretty uninhibited to me.  Brilliant job Crim!

thank you Sir Crow for an insightful comment yes I saw my way out :)

love Crim

giggling thank you for the pleasurable spankins ;)

also for such lovely comments..

I love you..

xoxoxo Brenda

Brenda, what powerful imaginary used to convey the internal struggles>the self-doubts; the questioning of
oneself. I can assure you that you are definitely a talented writer; the way you convey thoughts and emotions
through your words>I would have to believe definitely pretty enough too. Definitely a beautiful and interesting mind.

Keith

thank you most graciously Keith for such great comments :)

with love Brenda

brilliantly encapsulates the battle for self - strong and raw imagery - thought provoking but most of all real. I find it quite ironic that a writer such as yourself has that mental battle with 'Am I a good enough writer'. Clearly you are an exceptional writer, a true wordsmith. It is good that you question this in your own minds eye, humility is a required attribute of only the best of writers. As an avid fan of your work I know just how good you really are :-)

excellent ink :-)

thank you most graciously David I'm humbled by you comments :)

with love Crim

This was a nice personal piece, Crim. You expose yourself bravely and have come to a realization in the end. I have found, when entering the labyrinth of the mind, always bring a lantern. There are monsters along the way, but when you shine a light on them, you will find they are cute little critters who just needs a hug and a friend. I enjoyed this poem.

thank you for the insightful comment and great comment :)

with love Crim