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Don't forget to smile
You walk into a garage
The last thing you see
Is a base
ball
bat
From the darkness your eyes open
There's in blurry figure
Shifting in and out of focus
On your cheeks are two metal rods
Your feet in a bucket of water
With a generator
The figure flips on a switch
240 volts of surging electricity
Flowing from the wires and into your cheeks
Muscle spasms all over
Sniff...sniff
That's the smell of
Burning flesh
You try to scream but can't
You're too busy smiling
The volts are killing you slowly
All the figure simply says is
"Don't forget to smile"
The last thing you see
Is a base
ball
bat
From the darkness your eyes open
There's in blurry figure
Shifting in and out of focus
On your cheeks are two metal rods
Your feet in a bucket of water
With a generator
The figure flips on a switch
240 volts of surging electricity
Flowing from the wires and into your cheeks
Muscle spasms all over
Sniff...sniff
That's the smell of
Burning flesh
You try to scream but can't
You're too busy smiling
The volts are killing you slowly
All the figure simply says is
"Don't forget to smile"
Published 26th Sep 2015
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26th Sep 2015 9:58pm
See honey, the sterility worked better here. This was a story. Liked that. But the animal parts, sniff sniff and such, im really drawn to that. Id try and develop the primal, animalistic side of him.
Very good effort dol. Enjoyed.
🚬💋Jennifer
Very good effort dol. Enjoyed.
🚬💋Jennifer
27th Sep 2015 11:29am
