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Taste
I
just
want
one
taste.
Please....
no hurry
or haste.
My tongue,
in you.
One dip,
maybe two.
I
just want
to taste
You.
just
want
one
taste.
Please....
no hurry
or haste.
My tongue,
in you.
One dip,
maybe two.
I
just want
to taste
You.
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23rd Sep 2015 1:33am
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Re: Re. Taste
Thank you Ms Taryn for
the comment, I hope that
what comes next is a little
longer.
Thanks
Keith
the comment, I hope that
what comes next is a little
longer.
Thanks
Keith
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23rd Sep 2015 1:38am
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29th Sep 2015 1:03am
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23rd Sep 2015 1:41am
The taste buds are pumping. We start hallucinating tastes and smells when it gets unbearable! I am there with you on this one!
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29th Sep 2015 1:05am
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 2:00am
Ahhh . . . But that one taste could last for hours if you are tasting correctly. Love this poem.
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29th Sep 2015 1:09am
Hours? I really need to learn to taste like you Jerry! What's the secret?
Always fun.
Thanks
Keith
Always fun.
Thanks
Keith
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23rd Sep 2015 2:09am
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29th Sep 2015 1:13am
Have you had the pleasure as of late
Sweetheart? Don't answer that only
kidding. Thank you for your always kind comments. Waiting to read something new of yours!
Keith
Sweetheart? Don't answer that only
kidding. Thank you for your always kind comments. Waiting to read something new of yours!
Keith
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23rd Sep 2015 3:11am
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29th Sep 2015 1:17am
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23rd Sep 2015 5:39pm
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29th Sep 2015 1:18am
Thanks Dean, I really do appreciate
your supportive comments. Thanks
again.
Keith
your supportive comments. Thanks
again.
Keith
Re. Taste
Hmm I seem to be coming across quiet a few of your poems lately and I must say I haven't not like one of them yet quite a talent you have there
XXXMagick
XXXMagick
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29th Sep 2015 1:22am
Well you flatter me. I am so appreciative that you have
enjoyed my offerings. I look
forward to reading you, Ms. Magickgirl. Thanks again
Keith
enjoyed my offerings. I look
forward to reading you, Ms. Magickgirl. Thanks again
Keith
Re. Taste
29th Sep 2015 2:55am
Followed the bread crumbs...I have to say I think I shall stay for some toast! <3
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29th Sep 2015 3:52am
I am glad that you followed the bread crumbs. It is nice to make your acquaintance,
She who is shrouded in mystery. Thanks
so much for stopping by.
Keith
She who is shrouded in mystery. Thanks
so much for stopping by.
Keith