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Solitary
Alone I sit once again
a prisoner of my thoughts
pressing questions left unanswered
in the setting dusk
only time will tell the tale
of pennance versus praise
standing up or lying down
the choice is ours to make
a prisoner of my thoughts
pressing questions left unanswered
in the setting dusk
only time will tell the tale
of pennance versus praise
standing up or lying down
the choice is ours to make
Published 20th Sep 2015
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20th Sep 2015 9:04pm
You catch the effect of being a prisoner of one's own thinking with "pressing conclusions left unanswered" and the conflict of "penance versus praise." You're wise in saying "the choice is ours to make." Fine concise write Scot!
24th Sep 2015 4:17am
Thank you Mr Crow! Just knocking the cobwebs off , I appreciate your take on the work! Cheers!
21st Sep 2015 00:54am
24th Sep 2015 4:18am
