Inner Eclipse

This poem is interwoven with "Full Womb - Crescent Moon". If you have not read that one, take a look... jj

Oh jj, this has such an airy, starry dreamy feel to it.

My favorite part of the poem:

"Tonight I will be thinking of you
When I see the moon fading from view
The curve of the crescent growing tonight
Reflects off the curve of your child bathed in moon light

The life within has come full circle
From slender crescent the full moon rose
Creation's big bang conceived a miracle
When the umbra breaks a celestial diamond explodes"    So yeah, I enjoyed it very much! Xo

So let me see if I got this right, your favorite part was the part from the beginning to the end?
Lol, You are my favorite fan Rain, from beginning to end... :)
JJ

nice dreamscape, very picturesque - love it :-)

Thank you again David! JJ

My first thought when I finish reading this was it would go good with the other one you wrote full womb then I read your comment stating it does. Great write love how the word's flow.

Thanks for commenting DP, and glad you connected the stars while reading!
JJ