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CUM...
Aways from intent of spilled thought
Random 'waves' of pulsing warmth
Oscillation of veined emotive births
Under mounting pressure to contain
Sweat beads trickle, with each tinge
Every breath shortened expectations
Drained dry, thru creamy bursts...
Led 'futureless life' to it's final resting place after having been AROUSED...
Random 'waves' of pulsing warmth
Oscillation of veined emotive births
Under mounting pressure to contain
Sweat beads trickle, with each tinge
Every breath shortened expectations
Drained dry, thru creamy bursts...
Led 'futureless life' to it's final resting place after having been AROUSED...
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Re. CUM...
16th Sep 2015 4:42pm
mmm delicious art work ;)
creamily erotic and sexy hot write Poe..
I love it..
with love Crim
creamily erotic and sexy hot write Poe..
I love it..
with love Crim
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16th Sep 2015 5:11pm
Aaaawwww Crim, you delight me! Thanks so much, appreciate u always.... :) oh, here take a lick lol
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Re: Re. CUM...
16th Sep 2015 9:20pm
OMG... U made a comment! lol
Thank u my sweetness, im happy you liked n especially my pic. I'm grateful truly :)
Thank u my sweetness, im happy you liked n especially my pic. I'm grateful truly :)
Re. CUM...
17th Sep 2015 00:10am
Keep calm and keep him 'cummin' :)
....like the taste of her favorite lollipop, just one lick is all you need. Very sexy ink with the perfect mouthwatering image.
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Re: Re. CUM...
17th Sep 2015 1:12am
Lol love your positivity n love your comment! Ur the best my sweet Rain, n I truly appreciate you :)
Re. CUM...
17th Sep 2015 2:54am
whew! this was Hot Hot Hot!!! way to AROUSE the senses..Awesome Ink and Artwork Poetik
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Re: Re. CUM...
17th Sep 2015 3:03am
Aaawww thank u my sweetness! I'm happy to have heated you up! lol
n as always I'm grateful for your continued support :)
n as always I'm grateful for your continued support :)
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17th Sep 2015 9:59am
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17th Sep 2015 8:45pm
MMMMMM PM what a piece Sir
Makin the temp definitely rise about 20 degrees here
Makin the temp definitely rise about 20 degrees here
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Re: Re. CUM...
18th Sep 2015 2:08am
Aaawww lol then come on in from the cold lol thank my sweetie pie, appreciate ur support always :)
Re. CUM...
17th Sep 2015 9:40pm
dead laughin @ rain's saucy comment! that lady's brilliant!
whooo lawdy poe, i can practically taste the spillage here ;) fantastic tension throughout this
xoxox
whooo lawdy poe, i can practically taste the spillage here ;) fantastic tension throughout this
xoxox
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18th Sep 2015 2:17am
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18th Sep 2015 2:18am
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2015 4:29am
holy hot &%$*..Talk about a tease of a 'taste' lol
Its eloquently written, but as erotica should be, its sizzling hot between the lines.
you did it again maestro! ;)
Its eloquently written, but as erotica should be, its sizzling hot between the lines.
you did it again maestro! ;)

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Re: Re. CUM...
18th Sep 2015 9:37am
Aaaaawwww.... Muah muah muah!!! You sweet babydoll you! Thank u my dear, your contined support is greatly appreciated always :)
Re. CUM...
22nd Sep 2015 2:44am
Such great descriptive words. It is beautiful to be able to understand how everyone has a unique way to describe the same type of sensation.
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Re: Re. CUM...
22nd Sep 2015 10:36am
T8M! Wow, where ya been!? lol
happy to see a visit from you, n very pleased you liked my lil spill lol
Thank you much, n yea I agree
folks have a variety of ways to express
the same things in general :) appreciate you lady
happy to see a visit from you, n very pleased you liked my lil spill lol
Thank you much, n yea I agree
folks have a variety of ways to express
the same things in general :) appreciate you lady
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9th Oct 2015 8:53pm
Lmao no it wasn't, tell me more lol
Truly, thank u do much my friend, I'm grateful for support always :)
Truly, thank u do much my friend, I'm grateful for support always :)