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Burying last years weeds
It seems to have no end,
does the fog impede ?
shadows, distant tempt;
gleaming shining shear,
folds a slumbering soil
waking moles and worms
burying last year’s weeds.
does the fog impede ?
shadows, distant tempt;
gleaming shining shear,
folds a slumbering soil
waking moles and worms
burying last year’s weeds.
Published 11th Sep 2015
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2015 8:05pm
there is just a slight....darkness...in this piece.
or...
i feel tempted to NOT bury last year's weeds.
either way, this is very well done.
or...
i feel tempted to NOT bury last year's weeds.
either way, this is very well done.
11th Sep 2015 9:18pm
Fog and shadows,weeds ( one definition of a weed is 'a plant out of place' I leave it there.I wrote this quickly with little time to think .Thankyou for commenting Minerva Grace
Anonymous
11th Sep 2015 8:58pm
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11th Sep 2015 9:19pm
Anonymous
18th Sep 2015 11:53pm
The cycle of life well told Mr Kexby.
Sometimes things need to be buried for other things to come to life.
Sometimes things need to be buried for other things to come to life.
24th Sep 2015 11:52am
