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Until...
Until...
I never breathe you again
each exhale I expel is you
the very essence of this 'zen'
grey, your matter colored my hue
Until I never see you again
scenes of beauty encompass me
'twas you who 'sowed' us then
watered anew I never knew I'd see
Until I never need you again
forever I'll bleed, love's seed
each moment exists I am hopin'
your weather blankets my need
Until...
until, I never know you again
always, it seems impossible
that this hold will never end
Until...
I never breathe you again
each exhale I expel is you
the very essence of this 'zen'
grey, your matter colored my hue
Until I never see you again
scenes of beauty encompass me
'twas you who 'sowed' us then
watered anew I never knew I'd see
Until I never need you again
forever I'll bleed, love's seed
each moment exists I am hopin'
your weather blankets my need
Until...
until, I never know you again
always, it seems impossible
that this hold will never end
Until...
Published 8th Sep 2015
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8th Sep 2015 10:46am
8th Sep 2015 10:53am
9th Sep 2015 1:26am
Forgetting can be difficult, once you are there, its smooth sailing. Good read Poetik...:)
9th Sep 2015 2:35am
9th Sep 2015 2:35am
We all at some point need to let something or someone go....nicely done.
9th Sep 2015 5:49am
True, I'm def. In agreement :) thank you my dear for your thoughts I truly appreciate them n you :)
9th Sep 2015 3:57am
9th Sep 2015 5:52am
Damn... Yea Stevie, what an amazing talent he is!
Thanks for the reminder, n visit bro! :)
Thanks for the reminder, n visit bro! :)
Yes I hear he can play a myriad of instruments despite being blind. Also quite the humanitarian and has a great sense of humor. I get the feeling like Ray Charles and Quincy Jones, he has heard his share of raunchy jokes!
9th Sep 2015 2:49pm
Oh yea I'm Aware of his multi instrument skills lol
n he's funny for sure, guess God
gave him more becuz of his lack of sight
n he's funny for sure, guess God
gave him more becuz of his lack of sight
9th Sep 2015 1:26pm
9th Sep 2015 2:50pm
Thank you Kate, very pleased u liked n
ur support as always is appreciated :)
ur support as always is appreciated :)
12th Sep 2015 00:01am
While nothing is impossible, I definitely feel you here.
Hugs to you ; )
Hugs to you ; )
12th Sep 2015 9:57am
Mmmmm u feel me!? Is that why I'm all heated this morn? lol thank you my sweet one, I agree of course n I thank you for your continued support n appreciate you always :)
12th Sep 2015 11:47am
"grey, your matter colored my hue" love that line,wonderful wordplay, i know that "grey" all too well where it seems someone comsumes every thought in your brain...this line also makes me think of a stoic statue with a somber smile,where a tinge of hope still lingers in the hurt..Excellent ink as always Poetik!!!
12th Sep 2015 1:53pm
I adore you my sweet Desire, n I must say you're very astute...somber with a tinge of hope was pretty much the essence of the inspiration to spill this lol... Thanks n big Hugs to you my dear! :)
9th Oct 2015 8:22pm
9th Oct 2015 8:49pm
13th Jun 2016 8:16pm
The saddest thing about this is that you can't unsee...can't unlearn...can't unknow something. So it then becomes some kind of perpetual misery unless something changes. Very beautiful write.
Willow
Willow
14th Jun 2016 2:32am
