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(S & M) senryu IV
rattling to the floor
your unholy intentions
wet rosary beads
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remove God's collar
Judas' kiss personified
surrendered flesh taut
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Re. (S & M) senryu IV
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2015 11:38pm
Dark and evil~rotic come to mind. . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin;)

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Re: Re. (S & M) senryu IV
4th Sep 2015 9:16am
I must confess, this one comes from experience ... church cemetery 😈😇 (she insists she's still an angel though)
Glad you enjoyed it.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Re. (S & M) senryu IV
4th Sep 2015 3:56pm
God, just read this one. Yes! So beautiful. My shameful penchant for the erotics of religion and sacred ritual. A man in a priest's outfit, and I'm there drooling. Gorgeous image with gorgeous words.
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Re: Re. (S & M) senryu IV
4th Sep 2015 6:10pm
I must admit it was the comment of the poet Ahavati to my first set of poems in this series that set the second poem in motion, "Judas' kiss personified" ... from there I sought some contrasting erotic dynamics ... white collar versus taut flesh (which will be taught a lesson)
Re. (S & M) senryu IV
6th Sep 2015 7:25am
This religious aspect of Christian garb must be what partly makes the áo dài and cheongsam so erotic to westerners.
Wonderful to see erotica in such a limited form as senryu.
Wonderful to see erotica in such a limited form as senryu.
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Re: Re. (S & M) senryu IV
6th Sep 2015 8:20am
So much of it is the "forbidden fruit"'fantasy ... being tempted by that which we're not to have
I am glad the message came across in my short tomes
I am glad the message came across in my short tomes
Re. (S & M) senryu IV
It's actually on my bucket list to have sex in a church or to seduce a nun. great ink. X)
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Re: Re. (S & M) senryu IV
14th Sep 2015 00:28am
Re. (S & M) senryu IV
O'gaawd
... ok, so this whole piece
was a tantalizing bit but
that last portions..
that last portion.. .turn my
head sideways
wow, unexpected!,
but that's what I love
-Howlings
... ok, so this whole piece
was a tantalizing bit but
that last portions..
that last portion.. .turn my
head sideways
wow, unexpected!,
but that's what I love
-Howlings
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Re: Re. (S & M) senryu IV
16th Sep 2016 6:14am
lol ... Sideways? You and my grandfather, ol' southern minister that he was
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16th Sep 2016 6:16am