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(S & M) senryu III
seeking redemption
public annihilation
arched for confession
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breadth of her shoulders
grinds cold granite to tittles
rattling pendulum
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dripping black and blue
safety word not forgotten
i never use it
Published 3rd Sep 2015
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2015 11:36pm
Sir Lobo, these haikus are beautiful and stunning;. . . excellent wordplay through out. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
4th Sep 2015 9:09am
Thank you, not only for the read and comment, but for providing the springboard to get me going on these
Salud
Salud
4th Sep 2015 6:19am
4th Sep 2015 9:12am
My partner in crime and I tend to like the not so hidden spaces, rides to work are hellacious ... Thanks for read & comment
4th Sep 2015 2:08pm
I know I'm no critic. But guh, so beautiful. My favorite so far... I can feel that cold granite against me. Exquisitely succinct and even more haunting paired with the searing image. Incredible, LSP!
4th Sep 2015 6:03pm
I'm thrilled you enjoyed my work here! Black & white photography by it's very nature adds a sense of tension and gravity to almost any subject.
