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(S & M) senryu II
scorched millennia
joy for a nanosecond
succumb to my will
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i'm down on my knees
says don't stray you nasty bitch
blind dog taught to heel
Published 3rd Sep 2015
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3rd Sep 2015 7:56pm
Yeah, the image is hot! ... It made the words jump for me. I love that his leash is the blindfold; there's something poetically telling in that.
Thanks for the comment.
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2015 11:42pm
It's nice to see men on their knees before a woman. . .there's just something erotic about that. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
4th Sep 2015 9:19am
Yes you're right before is best because the rewards can be as endless as she ... Thanks for the read and comment, it's much appreciated.
