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I meander through the meadow of my mind
Trying to sort order
Names, places
Deeds done and undone
No specific order
Apprehension, condescension, mainly disorder
A smiling figure
I place my wish
A flooding tide returns to order
My mind
Misconceptions mainly of the man made to order.
Trying to sort order
Names, places
Deeds done and undone
No specific order
Apprehension, condescension, mainly disorder
A smiling figure
I place my wish
A flooding tide returns to order
My mind
Misconceptions mainly of the man made to order.
Published 9th Jun 2011
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9th Jun 2011 6:06am
I wasn't sold until the last line. It left me wondering where you were going, but you pulled it together. Bravo.
10th Jun 2011 6:38am
cheers brother, new to this game, words of encouragement much appreciated.
