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I am because of You
Love all of me, especially the tainted and torn
The weathered, weak and sharply scorned
Only you can hear my smile
Even behind the salty tears
The best of me has come from you
My beautiful one and only
My deepest love,real and true
I am me, only because of you
The weathered, weak and sharply scorned
Only you can hear my smile
Even behind the salty tears
The best of me has come from you
My beautiful one and only
My deepest love,real and true
I am me, only because of you
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Re. I am because of You
1st Sep 2015 7:47am
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5th Sep 2015 8:35am
Never one real and true. I believed, ever so briefly and my heart was fooled, forever broken. And so no, there has never been anyone.
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Re. I am because of You
1st Sep 2015 8:28am
it digs deep into the guarded place, beneath the tears & pain of experience. tender & surrendering poetry...
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Re. I am because of You
5th Sep 2015 00:08am
There is a mystical/ inner quality about this brief write that reminds me of George Harrison's work.
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5th Sep 2015 00:51am
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5th Sep 2015 1:12am
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5th Sep 2015 1:16am
Re. I am because of You
5th Sep 2015 4:10am
Beautifully written poem. It is always nice To have someone that love you for who you are.
My favorite part
The best of me has come from you
My beautiful one and only
Thanks for sharing
My favorite part
The best of me has come from you
My beautiful one and only
Thanks for sharing
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6th Sep 2015 00:30am
Re. I am because of You
Anonymous
24th Oct 2015 5:18am
A lovely little hearttwisting from this piece dear. Merci dame.
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Re: Re. I am because of You
10th Feb 2020 10:50pm
Thank you dear. This place allows me to be me. Its great and not so great yet getting what you feel out in a place like this with all you beautiful people is better than therapy for me. Back at ya, honey. <3
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