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Shameless
I give her a bump and .
Soon, she is mine.
She dims the lights and
Tries not to look into my eyes.
I feel no shame—
Not tonight.
She starts to strip as
I chop up a few lines.
The exchange is understood.
She craves the drugs and
I’m addicted to her beauty.
My nose starts to bleed and
My body begins to feel weak.
We take drugs to stay numb and
Our ability to feel is soon lost.
We have sex rather than talk and
The door always remains locked.
This hotel room becomes our home and
For the night, our regrets are long gone.
Soon, she is mine.
She dims the lights and
Tries not to look into my eyes.
I feel no shame—
Not tonight.
She starts to strip as
I chop up a few lines.
The exchange is understood.
She craves the drugs and
I’m addicted to her beauty.
My nose starts to bleed and
My body begins to feel weak.
We take drugs to stay numb and
Our ability to feel is soon lost.
We have sex rather than talk and
The door always remains locked.
This hotel room becomes our home and
For the night, our regrets are long gone.
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Re. Shameless
30th Aug 2015 6:39am
Re. Shameless
30th Aug 2015 1:26pm
You paint a picture...dark, lonely, truthful to some...you allowed me to experience it without the pain...
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Re. Shameless
Anonymous
30th Aug 2015 5:10pm
Raw with unspoken emotions packed with sadness.
T. I'm quite impressed how evolved your work has gotten. You need to write more often :)
T. I'm quite impressed how evolved your work has gotten. You need to write more often :)
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Re. Shameless
1st Oct 2015 1:40am
You can't sing it like you do if you haven't breathed it. I've missed you.
"I give her a bump and
Soon, she is mine. "
"She dims the lights and
Tries not to look into my eyes."
We have sex rather than talk and
The door always remains locked
"I give her a bump and
Soon, she is mine. "
"She dims the lights and
Tries not to look into my eyes."
We have sex rather than talk and
The door always remains locked
1
Re. Shameless
31st Oct 2019 12:47pm
I’ve had such an evening.
The highs and the lows.
I put myself there with you, it was hot. (;
Losty
The highs and the lows.
I put myself there with you, it was hot. (;
Losty
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Re: Re. Shameless
31st Oct 2019 12:49pm
You are pretty awesome!
Thank you for taking the time to read and
Thank you for the reading list add.
I'm looking forward to diving deeper into your work :)
Thank you for taking the time to read and
Thank you for the reading list add.
I'm looking forward to diving deeper into your work :)
Re. Shameless
12th Jun 2021 10:50am
Re: Re. Shameless
12th Jun 2021 10:53am
Thank you. I'm surprised this is the one that cought your eye. I like it to though. Thank you for your time and attention. It is much appreciated. ✌️👌🤘
Re: Re. Shameless
12th Jun 2021 10:58am
I'm finding similar traits in our work. I'm one of those broken women you tend to attract. So here I am finding you. I've never been in this particular woman's shoes (this specific situation) But close enough to feel it.
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Re: Re. Shameless
12th Jun 2021 11:01am
I'm going to check out some more of your work and you check out mine. I'm sure it will be fun to compare ideas and concepts with each other.
Re: Re. Shameless
12th Jun 2021 11:06am
Same here. I also have the profile BlackWidow. It's a little different than what I have here. Had to have an escape when I was here a lot. Couldn't get work done with so much attention on friends. But I can't complain about having supporters.
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Re: Re. Shameless
12th Jun 2021 11:09am
Oh ok. I have another called Gonzo69 with all my earlier we work too. There is like 45 poems on there but it's pretty good if you ever get board of the new stuff.
Re: Re. Shameless
12th Jun 2021 11:12am
Re: Re. Shameless
12th Jun 2021 11:26am
Stranger things have happened.
Words are the most attractive
thing in my mind ❤️😎✋
Words are the most attractive
thing in my mind ❤️😎✋