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Waste of Space
Is there a waste of space
No
Neither here nor there
No such thing as waste of space
Trees take up space
So do birds
Yes! Even thee birds
They take up some space
So does space
Yep! It really has a time and place
I think so
Space - takes up space
The stars the galaxies
take up universal space
What a waste
Space is space
When I sit I take up space
Remember not to make a face
Even face wastes a little space
The colors of the rainbow take up space
When it rains
Rain takes up space
Oh what a waste!
Snow on ground takes up space
Even hail, which makes me wail,
takes up space
Oh what a chase to find my face
in tons of space
No
Neither here nor there
No such thing as waste of space
Trees take up space
So do birds
Yes! Even thee birds
They take up some space
So does space
Yep! It really has a time and place
I think so
Space - takes up space
The stars the galaxies
take up universal space
What a waste
Space is space
When I sit I take up space
Remember not to make a face
Even face wastes a little space
The colors of the rainbow take up space
When it rains
Rain takes up space
Oh what a waste!
Snow on ground takes up space
Even hail, which makes me wail,
takes up space
Oh what a chase to find my face
in tons of space
Published 8th Jun 2011
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14th Jun 2011 10:05pm
Very nice, and a very valid point, nothing is a waste of space and when you look around us there is so much space. Sometimes it seems almost too much space. Which I think you could go a little deeper into something more contraversial like the ridicule term "a waste of space". Question it, say how can anyone be a waste of space? We take up space even when we die, we were put on this earth by a higher power. Find a topic to which you personally feel a connection with, and argue your point. I very much like this one, the concept is flawless keep it up =D
16th Jun 2011 3:48pm
16th Jun 2011 3:48pm
With this one I went for a reality check. Also to find my place in space. After all, Earth is in space.
