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A crack in the ceiling
Open a Window into my head,
Where you will find sky's are still
a baby blue.
Sun lit rays of light,
still shines upon your hand,
as pristine white puffy clouds
roll by swallowing the light
then regretting the rays of warmth
Back upon the world.
Nature way of playing peekaboo
With us.
Where the sun still shines
You can find me hiding there
Away from this broken world
And all the problems of of day to day life
Don't look at the cracks in my sky
They where never there.
Where you will find sky's are still
a baby blue.
Sun lit rays of light,
still shines upon your hand,
as pristine white puffy clouds
roll by swallowing the light
then regretting the rays of warmth
Back upon the world.
Nature way of playing peekaboo
With us.
Where the sun still shines
You can find me hiding there
Away from this broken world
And all the problems of of day to day life
Don't look at the cracks in my sky
They where never there.
Published 24th Aug 2015
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29th Aug 2015 7:25pm
"Open a Window into my head,
Where you will find sky's are still
a baby blue."
~The solace in my head is safer than the world[suck] & drama so I totally relate
to hiding there.. lovely refreshing image shared here misters.. as a fresh breath
of open sky.
"Don't look at the cracks in my sky
They where never there."
~and in relating.... to your perfect end lines?.. I say- "sshh, I neeeever saw/read bout those cracks" ;) eg.
wicked wknd wishes to you!
~d
Where you will find sky's are still
a baby blue."
~The solace in my head is safer than the world[suck] & drama so I totally relate
to hiding there.. lovely refreshing image shared here misters.. as a fresh breath
of open sky.
"Don't look at the cracks in my sky
They where never there."
~and in relating.... to your perfect end lines?.. I say- "sshh, I neeeever saw/read bout those cracks" ;) eg.
wicked wknd wishes to you!
~d
8th Sep 2015 11:59pm
love the heart of this person...he is practical on the outside but on the inside he is all about beauty of nature and love.
Anonymous
12th Sep 2015 4:08am
Great title and powerful opening lines, you almost make it surreal, how the sky is still blue. That is a wonderful way to draw the reader in.
Very well done.
Note: last line 'were' not 'where'.
Very well done.
Note: last line 'were' not 'where'.
