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Ass Kicking Haiku (Literally) - - - for kick ass haikus Comp
We need discipline
Currently it is lacking
A solution found
It’s Suitable for all
Those who step out of line
Can be corrected
Many deserve
Way too few actually get one
Such is an ass kicking
Anyone can take it
Some folk cannot dish it out
The man with one leg
I’d like to help out
I am a man with one leg
Up for sit and kick
Currently it is lacking
A solution found
It’s Suitable for all
Those who step out of line
Can be corrected
Many deserve
Way too few actually get one
Such is an ass kicking
Anyone can take it
Some folk cannot dish it out
The man with one leg
I’d like to help out
I am a man with one leg
Up for sit and kick
Published 18th Aug 2015
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18th Aug 2015 10:41pm
it's the poor donkey like creature
I feel sorry for..:)
I was once followed by one across
a wood in Ireland, I really must tell
that story one day, I mean now that
was an ass..!
I feel sorry for..:)
I was once followed by one across
a wood in Ireland, I really must tell
that story one day, I mean now that
was an ass..!
19th Aug 2015 1:13am
I have never been followed by and ass that wasn't my own :-)
ty for reading and your witty ass comment :-)
ty for reading and your witty ass comment :-)
18th Aug 2015 11:15pm
19th Aug 2015 1:12am
19th Aug 2015 3:59pm
24th Aug 2015 8:53pm
Grrrrrrrr - not really that fierce (lol)
thanks for reading, commenting and your wishes :-)
thanks for reading, commenting and your wishes :-)
