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For A Friend
Was saddened to hear of your death, old friend
None know better than I
How cloudy thoughts
Make for gray days
I wish I could have given you
The hope that was given me
But they say you're years gone away
So as fond memories bleed bittersweet
I sit and wonder
If suicide is painless
Why is my heart so heavy?
Published 13th Aug 2015
| Edited 14th Jan 2022
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16th Aug 2015 5:32am
Ooh I really like the lines
"None know better than I
How cloudy thoughts
Make for gray days"
Simple, yet it really paints a picture!
And "If suicide is painless
Why is my heart so heavy?"
I really relate to this. Suicide is such a selfish way to die.
"None know better than I
How cloudy thoughts
Make for gray days"
Simple, yet it really paints a picture!
And "If suicide is painless
Why is my heart so heavy?"
I really relate to this. Suicide is such a selfish way to die.
17th Aug 2015 2:03pm
22nd Aug 2015 9:42am
How enjoyable to read such a beautifully written poem a simplle message,sincere.
22nd Aug 2015 2:53pm
