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I can see again
I have been hurt
but I can see again
through the confusion
of where I’ve been
the scars are blinding,
I can see through
the hurt
and I can see again.
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Re. I can see again
12th Aug 2015 11:32pm
whatever the cause of the hurt
I'm glad that you can see your way
through it -
a worrying poem,
but a determined
one, I think...
I'm glad that you can see your way
through it -
a worrying poem,
but a determined
one, I think...
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Re: Re. I can see again
13th Aug 2015 5:46am
Paul, thank you. Although I like the line, I took out the negative connotation for this poem. There are always better days to come – always. :)
Re. I can see again
13th Aug 2015 00:10am
"eternal killilling"? Sounds a bit dramatic.
Ever hear the expression, "The light shines through the scars."
Ever hear the expression, "The light shines through the scars."
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Re. I can see again
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13th Aug 2015 1:05am
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Re: Re. I can see again
13th Aug 2015 5:52am
Re. I can see again
13th Aug 2015 3:46pm
I just finished the autobiography of Ronda Rousey, "My Fight/Your Fight" ...
Her mantra is " ... win every second of your life"
The fact that you've written this touching piece says your winning ... Keep your dignity and grace ... And your quill.
Cheers
Her mantra is " ... win every second of your life"
The fact that you've written this touching piece says your winning ... Keep your dignity and grace ... And your quill.
Cheers
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Re: Re. I can see again
17th Aug 2015 6:47am
I appreciate your wonderful sensitivity, Lobo, thank you for taking the time and saying as much; cheers :)
Re. I can see again
14th Aug 2015 6:23am
Re. I can see again
27th Aug 2015 00:22am
taking a breath and reading your poem again...captures the pain without being sentimental...just true.
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