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Slipknot Kisses
I found myself on the dark side
of the Moon tonight,
hummin’ crib death lullabys – and thinking of you
I needed something cold
to wrap my mind around,
and something special to put this moon dust in
So I plucked that ol bottle from the Moon’s eye,
unclenched my fist and let it all fall in
(just a little token, for you, from me)
If you hold it up to the starlight
you can see a glimmer of dreams inside
and a few love songs beatin’ their wings against the rim
I sealed it just the way you like it too
with a soft slipknot kiss…
of my realities twisted sense
[.]
© 2015 blue angel
Published 10th Aug 2015
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10th Aug 2015 8:50pm
I love the magical feel of this piece...it reminds me of Tinkerbell and Peter Pan for some reason :) Brava Blue! I've been missing your poetry.
10th Aug 2015 8:52pm
10th Aug 2015 10:45pm
10th Aug 2015 11:59pm
so much hidden, & so much revealed in your poem, Angel. the beauty always shines brighter than the moon.
feeling the tenderness of those kisses briefly as they slip away...
feeling the tenderness of those kisses briefly as they slip away...
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11th Aug 2015 00:11am
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11th Aug 2015 00:39am
Oh how you take us away. Your writes are always special. They simply just make me stop and get lost in my thoughts, thoughts that are alluring and captivating.
11th Aug 2015 1:48am
beautiful Angel I hold tight to those moon light kisses..
made from a noose even if not for me..
gorgeous ink lovely one..
with love Crim
made from a noose even if not for me..
gorgeous ink lovely one..
with love Crim
12th Aug 2015 11:17am
Why is tht the night brings a dark twisted element inside us all. I love this write. Hi :))
19th Aug 2015 1:51pm
This piece is so very lovely, in inspires a romance, perhaps a little sorrow and a soulful steady hold and taking joy still in something that is passed. Strong Angel.
1st Sep 2015 1:16am
Lillith abide.
God this is lovely, sexy, a brilliant stunner..
A pleasure treasure to have found you tonight, was feeling like howling loud becons to my man in the moon.
Your words couldnt have been better company to my thoughts.
🌹🌜J🌛
God this is lovely, sexy, a brilliant stunner..
A pleasure treasure to have found you tonight, was feeling like howling loud becons to my man in the moon.
Your words couldnt have been better company to my thoughts.
🌹🌜J🌛
1st Sep 2015 11:07pm
Ooo, I appreciate your lovely, and evocative commentary! The Moon deserves those beckoning howls... Enjoy your night, Jennifer! -blue angel
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11th Sep 2015 2:39pm
Your energy rouses me. I'm honored by your thoughts. Deeply appreciative, blue angel
13th Sep 2015 4:20am
I sealed it just the way you like it too
with a soft slipknot kiss…
of my realities twisted sense . <--- I love that. Perfect ending...
Lovely piece blue.... Xo
with a soft slipknot kiss…
of my realities twisted sense . <--- I love that. Perfect ending...
Lovely piece blue.... Xo
13th Sep 2015 3:50pm
13th Sep 2015 3:28pm
Another musical reference comes to mind; this time the collection by Andreas Vollenwider, Down To The Moon
Thank you immensely for reading. I'll check the songs out. :) - blue angel
Edit: Thanks for sharing such a lovely soft symphony of sound!
Anonymous
25th Sep 2015 6:03pm
Angel, this is beautifully brilliant.. big fan.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
1st Dec 2015 00:08am
beautiful write, nothin better than the twisted sisters , only ones i can listen too haha
