Capillus de Sanguine

so masterfully seductive and stunningly beautiful lovely Angel..

love the fierceness of the ending..

"Crawl to me, and bury your face
against my flesh so I can see.

I gaze down at your wounds, and smile,
then look back at the shadows and growl.

Only the thick of night may witness,
my need to feed upon such afflictions"

making me dreamy today..

with love Crim.

Thank you, Darling Crim. Your lovely words make me smile, and growl. :)~ - blue angel

Angel, this is brilliant.. your flow, and phrasing.. the imagery dark and vivid.. into the list it goes.. with love, and respect..




Dave

Thank you, Dave! I'm deeply honored by your bookmarking, and thoughts of it. - blue angel

Blue, The imagery in this piece is fabulous and complex and your language is beautiful. In this stanza I envisioned myself running down a dark forest trail pursued by strange, crawling creatures in my quest for eternal glory:
"Quicken your steps,
rush with panting breaths!
For the wellspring has sprung
bejeweling the crown of illusion."

Perhaps I'm a dragon with a tongue that scorches the earth. Anyway that's my wild interpretation :) Brava bella poeta!

Ah, your accentual tongue thrills me! Your visual thoughts are quite intriguing, - I'm tremendously pleased that you like it. - blue angel

I agree with Crim masterly seductive I love it

Thank you, Kavik1, for stopping by! I very much appreciate your thoughts. - blue angel

Thank you, Topless Taryn! :)~ I'm thrilled to have captured your emotive thoughts in such a sensual way. With deep appreciation, blue angel

the mention of serpents & hair conjures up the cruel image of Medusa.
I wonder what devious realms you have traveled, Angel, to create art of this magnitude...

This portrait of Lilith I came across would closer describe my, maiden with 'hair of blood'. I'm deeply honored to receive your thoughts. - Medusa does have a lovely dark intrigue, as well. :)~ blue angel

Oh how strange Blue. Lol
Gorgeous write.

"I gaze down at your wounds, and smile,
then look back at the shadows and growl."

Very jungle feline vibe given off here. Primal, from the Earth she rose from.
Love lilliths story, shame so much has been lost by mans fear and tampering with scripture.

💙Jennifer

I agree. :)Thank you for sharing your vibrant thoughts. Always a pleasure, blue angel

...this ink is Amazing, blue! Just wonderfully written!

I loved :  "Quicken your steps,  
rush with panting breaths!  
For the wellspring has sprung
bejeweling the crown of illusion."

Gosh, you just have the ability to hook a reader from the very first line and we slowly sink into your world of beautiful words.

Thank you, Lovely Rain! I'm honored to have you read, and comment on my work. Deeply appreciative, blue angel

The seduced seducing
Facing shadows
Into the eyes
Not from knees
Just to get closer
To the darkness
Of his realm
To master
How to please

Your thoughts are compelling. I'm thrilled to receive them. Miss seeing you around the shadows.:)~ blue angel

this is fuckin raw , good job

Grins wickedly.. Thank you, Hellbound!

Visceral and sensual. Enjoyed this.