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Play me
Theres a need
I want awakened
To be taken, recieved and primaly shaken.
To have this man, that knows his way
Spelunk and find my secret space,
Tickle mmmm, yes, a playful art.
But also would you find my heart?
I have that man much in mind,
He's lascivious, but also kind.
Purposeful with his lure
Talented, oh! Yes, for sure
Definitely he's a musician
No doubt the fingers of a physician.
Please cum, play my secret space
As if you were fingering your beloved bass
Offering me up to you
Now my doll, it is your cue
Teehee💋
I
I want awakened
To be taken, recieved and primaly shaken.
To have this man, that knows his way
Spelunk and find my secret space,
Tickle mmmm, yes, a playful art.
But also would you find my heart?
I have that man much in mind,
He's lascivious, but also kind.
Purposeful with his lure
Talented, oh! Yes, for sure
Definitely he's a musician
No doubt the fingers of a physician.
Please cum, play my secret space
As if you were fingering your beloved bass
Offering me up to you
Now my doll, it is your cue
Teehee💋
I
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Re. Play me
Anonymous
9th Aug 2015 1:37pm
Ahhh . . . And such an invitation is it to accept and work with you to fulfill dreams you haven't even dreamed of yet.
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9th Aug 2015 11:22pm
Re. Play me
9th Aug 2015 1:44pm
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10th Aug 2015 2:53pm
Re. Play
9th Aug 2015 5:04pm
Playful, sexy piece. There is nothing quite like exploring a woman's
treasure, finding that spot that gives her pleasure. Feeling her thighs
tighten around your hands....
Well I guess you get the picture;
You've given me a little trip
down memory lane, early on a Sunday morning
treasure, finding that spot that gives her pleasure. Feeling her thighs
tighten around your hands....
Well I guess you get the picture;
You've given me a little trip
down memory lane, early on a Sunday morning
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10th Aug 2015 2:56pm
Re. Play me
9th Aug 2015 8:47pm
"To be taken, recieved and primaly shaken. <~ this wud be a "yes, please" request..
To have this man, that knows his way <~ a muuust!
Spelunk and find my secret space, <~ flecking great word use..
Tickle mmmm, yes, a playful art.
But also would you find my heart?" <~ and the devious 'awwes'.;)
~perfect sexy *Everythings going on here, lady. love this!
Sounds to be a hot cue w/a coveted check-list, oh so playful one. enjoyed your write! take care ;)
~d
To have this man, that knows his way <~ a muuust!
Spelunk and find my secret space, <~ flecking great word use..
Tickle mmmm, yes, a playful art.
But also would you find my heart?" <~ and the devious 'awwes'.;)
~perfect sexy *Everythings going on here, lady. love this!
Sounds to be a hot cue w/a coveted check-list, oh so playful one. enjoyed your write! take care ;)
~d
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Re: Re. Play me
9th Aug 2015 11:19pm
Thank you doll. Your comments are always thrilling to read. You take care! 💋
Re. Play me
9th Aug 2015 8:58pm
a sexy invitation of making sensual music... definitely hot and creative metaphor hehe... great ink :)
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9th Aug 2015 11:21pm
Re. Play me
Anonymous
10th Aug 2015 5:53am
How could I resist the invitation?
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10th Aug 2015 6:59am
Re. Play me
10th Aug 2015 7:05am
no one cpuld resist the invitation good write I learning to play the guitar now ha ha
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Re: Re. Play me
10th Aug 2015 2:42pm
Lol you're learning to play guitar now. Thats hysterical Glen. Thank you. 💋
Re. Play me
12th Aug 2015 1:35am
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12th Aug 2015 3:05am
Re. Play me
12th Aug 2015 12:30pm
miss jen, this is fantastic; almost whimsical & teasing in its tone at the beginning before changing subtly to find the depths of devotion. lovely stuff indeed.
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12th Aug 2015 1:52pm
Re. Play me
17th Aug 2015 4:14pm
An invitation only a fool would turn away from. I love how you chose spelunk as your metaphoric tool. Amazing poetry.
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Re: Re. Play me
17th Aug 2015 4:28pm
💋yes, well for the eexplorer in him. Lol not because there is anything cavernous about my,.. well. 😃 thank you thinline ha!