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Illoominatty (written as fatherly advice to my son David)
That’s fine!
Carry on!
You keep obeying ‘The Man’
Not me!
You go right ahead!
Just don’t come crying to me
When the lizardman is eating your dinner,
Shagging your wife,
Playing with your cats,
Walking your dog and
Wearing your fucking slippers
Carry on!
You keep obeying ‘The Man’
Not me!
You go right ahead!
Just don’t come crying to me
When the lizardman is eating your dinner,
Shagging your wife,
Playing with your cats,
Walking your dog and
Wearing your fucking slippers
Published 7th Aug 2015
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7th Aug 2015 9:02pm
Tell it to him straight David! Fairy tales will only make him smile as a child! Great advice!!!
JJ
JJ
8th Aug 2015 12:44pm
my youngest out of four is now 25 - i was always straight with my kids even when they were kids - they, even now come for advice because they no they get it straight from the hip with no bullshit :-)
thanks for reading and appreciating :-)
thanks for reading and appreciating :-)
Anonymous
7th Aug 2015 10:11pm
Hedonistic pleasures
Always end in strife
All the more intensified
If one ignores his wife
Always end in strife
All the more intensified
If one ignores his wife
8th Aug 2015 12:45pm
LOL x 100 - thanks for reading and your poetic response, it really brightened up my day
:-)
:-)
7th Aug 2015 10:54pm
8th Aug 2015 12:47pm
I think you are probably right, either that or the cat thing - he's a bit of a cataholic
glad you enjoyed it :-)
glad you enjoyed it :-)
Anonymous
8th Aug 2015 2:51pm
I absolutely love this and can relate ALL TOO WELL
nice truths here, write on
nice truths here, write on
8th Aug 2015 3:47pm
thank you so much for reading and such positive comments
Glad you enjoyed it :-)
Glad you enjoyed it :-)
