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SHADES OF DARKNESS
Oh what naked turbulent souls
Breathless in their act of oblivion
Intense kissing, heart throbbing
Hazel eyes awakened suddenly
By fingers nudging her softest spots
Mourns louder than a vehicle’s engine
Breasts clinging in delicate response
Tongue maliciously savoring the peaks
She greedily hangs on, yielding
Violence erupting till they reach hardcore
His pulsating manhood made stiff
By a single stroke of her tentative finger
His virile masculinity deeply aroused
“Let’s role play, you be my man”
He urges her mockingly, daring her to proceed
His hardened core tortured by her teeth
Raw squirms of masculine pleasure
She then tickles his thighs gently
He fights desperately to stay in control
But with every daring move he quivers
Shock written in his sky blue eyes
He’s been smitten by Miss not so innocent.
Breathless in their act of oblivion
Intense kissing, heart throbbing
Hazel eyes awakened suddenly
By fingers nudging her softest spots
Mourns louder than a vehicle’s engine
Breasts clinging in delicate response
Tongue maliciously savoring the peaks
She greedily hangs on, yielding
Violence erupting till they reach hardcore
His pulsating manhood made stiff
By a single stroke of her tentative finger
His virile masculinity deeply aroused
“Let’s role play, you be my man”
He urges her mockingly, daring her to proceed
His hardened core tortured by her teeth
Raw squirms of masculine pleasure
She then tickles his thighs gently
He fights desperately to stay in control
But with every daring move he quivers
Shock written in his sky blue eyes
He’s been smitten by Miss not so innocent.
Published 6th Aug 2015
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8th Aug 2015 2:37am
Firstly..? ...Sweet Hells, lady!! sexy cascade of words & I'm bowing as devout follower from here on out!
You have blended soft & loving intimacy with naughty play in a heedy way.. loves it!
"Hazel eyes awakened suddenly
By fingers nudging her softest spots" <~~ this being the 'sexy soft intimacy'..
"Violence erupting till they reach hardcore <~~ oh-so-hot lines, all 3..
His pulsating manhood made stiff
By a single stroke of her tentative finger" <~~ this, being the 'naughty playful' [finger] eg*.
"He urges her mockingly, daring her to proceed
His hardened core tortured by her teeth <~ !!! ..just, Yes. ..perfect..
Raw squirms of masculine pleasure
She then tickles his thighs gently"
"Shock written in his sky blue eyes <~~ more 'naughty' ..* wicked appreciation for the shock- it captures your *bold*
He’s been smitten by Miss not so innocent."
to my list with this jewel.. & welcomes- times more!.. will be catching up on your posts.
~d
You have blended soft & loving intimacy with naughty play in a heedy way.. loves it!
"Hazel eyes awakened suddenly
By fingers nudging her softest spots" <~~ this being the 'sexy soft intimacy'..
"Violence erupting till they reach hardcore <~~ oh-so-hot lines, all 3..
His pulsating manhood made stiff
By a single stroke of her tentative finger" <~~ this, being the 'naughty playful' [finger] eg*.
"He urges her mockingly, daring her to proceed
His hardened core tortured by her teeth <~ !!! ..just, Yes. ..perfect..
Raw squirms of masculine pleasure
She then tickles his thighs gently"
"Shock written in his sky blue eyes <~~ more 'naughty' ..* wicked appreciation for the shock- it captures your *bold*
He’s been smitten by Miss not so innocent."
to my list with this jewel.. & welcomes- times more!.. will be catching up on your posts.
~d
8th Aug 2015 9:20pm
Hahaha Darksighs, I'm glad you enjoyed every bit of it.
Well I just let the poem speak for itself. A thousand thanks
wouldn't be enough. I'm honored to have one more friend
in this site.
Well I just let the poem speak for itself. A thousand thanks
wouldn't be enough. I'm honored to have one more friend
in this site.
