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You Give Me Purpose
When I would burn
the world to the ground,
you ground my passions
your pool surrounds
When I would stand
quiet and worthless,
in the darkest of nights
you give me purpose
When I would shine
with nothing in sight,
you give me a path
in the night to light
When I would fight
without a just cause,
you give me the glory
of adoring applause
((Written in response to TCLilly (Tanzen)'s piece The Silent Fellow Wanderer: http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/208882-the-silent-fellow-wanderer/))
Published 4th Aug 2015
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4th Aug 2015 11:45pm
Nice write! I'm flattered :) and happy to have been your inspiration! Keep up the good work.
6th Aug 2015 10:31pm
7th Aug 2015 4:08am
Very smooth and warm! it's awesome to read appreciation/completion poems.
