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Recovery Freestyle
I'm
as
elementary
as LMNOP
and solid
as sedimentary
and searching
like a
moral invent-ory
and sillysillysilly
perhaps a bit illusory
You'll get used to me
as I choose to be
an itty bity bit
imaginary
But it's plain to see
that it's meant to be
It'll be for me
You'll see
and one day I'll be
Happyhappy
Joyous and Free
as
elementary
as LMNOP
and solid
as sedimentary
and searching
like a
moral invent-ory
and sillysillysilly
perhaps a bit illusory
You'll get used to me
as I choose to be
an itty bity bit
imaginary
But it's plain to see
that it's meant to be
It'll be for me
You'll see
and one day I'll be
Happyhappy
Joyous and Free
Published 4th Aug 2015
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7th Aug 2015 4:10am
Feels like skipping in the rain.
Sillysillysilly and itty bitty bit were both fine moments of the rhythm taking over and the words following the lead of the beat. I love every permutation of scat and it's clear you have a patter sense.
Happyhappy
Joyous and free.
Streaming energy is also really intense when we write of ourselves as works-in-progress as it sets our narrative upwards growing.
Sillysillysilly and itty bitty bit were both fine moments of the rhythm taking over and the words following the lead of the beat. I love every permutation of scat and it's clear you have a patter sense.
Happyhappy
Joyous and free.
Streaming energy is also really intense when we write of ourselves as works-in-progress as it sets our narrative upwards growing.
7th Aug 2015 4:56am
:O Thank you! I love the image of skipping in the rain, and I totally agree, the rhythm was really meant to be playful and skippy!
"I love every permutation of scat and it's clear you have a patter sense." - To be honest, I didn't entirely understand what you meant by this (and still, perhaps, don't entirely understand after googling...) but I'll take it as a compliment!
As for patter sense...Did you mean as in pitter-patter manner, or perhaps mis-spelled pattern (I highly doubt a mis-spelling) Either way, it would be an accurate observation as I appreciate and participate in both pitter-patter palpitations as well as particular patterns. And, as always, I love alliteration.
<3
"I love every permutation of scat and it's clear you have a patter sense." - To be honest, I didn't entirely understand what you meant by this (and still, perhaps, don't entirely understand after googling...) but I'll take it as a compliment!
As for patter sense...Did you mean as in pitter-patter manner, or perhaps mis-spelled pattern (I highly doubt a mis-spelling) Either way, it would be an accurate observation as I appreciate and participate in both pitter-patter palpitations as well as particular patterns. And, as always, I love alliteration.
<3
