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The View
I got a good view
As you walked away.
The curve of your
ass with each step
you sway.
Hair dropped down
to the small of
your back.
So long and curly;
Dark black.
Girl you're so fine
You got a knack,
for making everyone
take a look back.
For turning heads,
stealing hearts too.
Blouse is so tight,
barely contains you.
Tied in a knot just
above your ring.
Belly button...
What a beautiful thing.
Legs so long,
Nothing wrong.
Bare almost
To your thong.
Skirt slowly riding
up your hips,
With each step
It raises and dips.
Too much ass
not enough skirt.
It's beautiful,
Yeah, no one's hurt.
With each step,
with each sway
You help make it
a beautiful day.
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Re. The View
1st Aug 2015 11:42pm
Re. The View
1st Aug 2015 11:58pm
Thank you so much sir; I caught
that look a few months ago and
have not been able to shake it,
that look a few months ago and
have not been able to shake it,
Re. The View
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2015 1:35am
You let me see it through your eyes. Wonderfully visual writing. I wonder if it ever occurs to her that a poet will immortalize her yet forever she will be anonymous. Good read.

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Re: Re. The View
2nd Aug 2015 1:42am
Thanks Derrick, I just hope the words flowed as
smoothly as she did with each step.
smoothly as she did with each step.
Re. The View
2nd Aug 2015 5:45am
Re: Re. The View
2nd Aug 2015 6:03am
Thanks honey, I know it is a little lite
for this category. Always happy to
hear from you; really enjoyed your
last inking. :)
for this category. Always happy to
hear from you; really enjoyed your
last inking. :)
Re. The View
2nd Aug 2015 7:56am
Re: Re. The View
2nd Aug 2015 8:02am
Re. The View
2nd Aug 2015 9:13am
Sweet. And i hope she knew, but appreciate the memory being just yours if she didnt. Sexy. My! Good night treat 💋 lol
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Re. The View
2nd Aug 2015 3:42pm
Re. The View
2nd Aug 2015 5:31pm
"Yeah, no one's hurt.".. true-true.. 'cept the owie of hot liquid motion & images-- written So well..
was a stunning view captured, & you flowed strong thru out, w/layered descripts.. great piece ;)
be well m'dears,
~d
was a stunning view captured, & you flowed strong thru out, w/layered descripts.. great piece ;)
be well m'dears,
~d
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Re: Re. The View
Thank you, she is my favorite write;
really did not want to share her. I am so glad you approve. :)
Bit worried did not see you
on for a while, ok?