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Vampyre
So succulent
the slender
slope of flesh
that travels to your
clavicle
where the constellations
of my cravings
course and coalesce
So intoxicating
is your
incense
inflaming my senses
firing fervid
frenzied fevered
fingers flaming
through my frame
sated only by
incisors sinking
savagely
in your skin
Life leeched
lustfully
lingering liquidly
lovely
pulsating
prettily pouring
perfectly
poetically
Destined
drink
of death
Divine.
the slender
slope of flesh
that travels to your
clavicle
where the constellations
of my cravings
course and coalesce
So intoxicating
is your
incense
inflaming my senses
firing fervid
frenzied fevered
fingers flaming
through my frame
sated only by
incisors sinking
savagely
in your skin
Life leeched
lustfully
lingering liquidly
lovely
pulsating
prettily pouring
perfectly
poetically
Destined
drink
of death
Divine.
Published 30th Jul 2015
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30th Jul 2015 6:11pm
30th Jul 2015 7:58pm
30th Jul 2015 9:46pm
31st Jul 2015 3:30am
4th Aug 2015 3:33am
4th Aug 2015 6:48pm
7th Aug 2015 3:44am
I read this out loud a few times.
Ssss..... cccc...... iiiii......ffffff.... sss.... lllll......ppppppp......
Sciff. Slip.
Whoa.The riff didn't skip, but a whiff from the lips
Something past wit was inherent in it
Sciff. Slip.
Consonant alliteration used with such cadence
Leads to such twisted illicit lip placement
A poem like this is meant to elicit and awaken
Ears and senses with hypnotic euphonics
I can't imagine listening to this read out loud
Without being wow'ed by lip movements from the written route
Subtext devout, befuddled by the sexy pout
That this piece seems to be about!
Whether intentional or incidental,
The rhythm that is so instrumental
Leaves a trace in the mind so gentle
This was a fine vision and development.
Thank you for releasing.
Ssss..... cccc...... iiiii......ffffff.... sss.... lllll......ppppppp......
Sciff. Slip.
Whoa.The riff didn't skip, but a whiff from the lips
Something past wit was inherent in it
Sciff. Slip.
Consonant alliteration used with such cadence
Leads to such twisted illicit lip placement
A poem like this is meant to elicit and awaken
Ears and senses with hypnotic euphonics
I can't imagine listening to this read out loud
Without being wow'ed by lip movements from the written route
Subtext devout, befuddled by the sexy pout
That this piece seems to be about!
Whether intentional or incidental,
The rhythm that is so instrumental
Leaves a trace in the mind so gentle
This was a fine vision and development.
Thank you for releasing.
Whew! Why thank you for your
wonderful words,
good sir.
So sensual and
satisfying,
so gratifying to
stimulate such a
scintillating
titillating response!
28th Aug 2015 5:10pm
28th Aug 2015 5:34pm
Thanks a bunch! :)
Vampirism seems very lingual, to me...so I felt a heave use of alliteration was really appropriate.
Vampirism seems very lingual, to me...so I felt a heave use of alliteration was really appropriate.
13th Oct 2015 6:03pm
13th Oct 2015 8:49pm
