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something no so great
my mind draws no words share
im so embarrassed by my self
i cant write any thing great
i cant seem to express my self
the dirty thoughts of love n lust
tell you how i love how we fuck
tell you your bodies a temple
and i just wanna praise it , to
fuck you love you and sex you up
choke you spank you as you cum
these thoughts of mine are to much
i want to let this out before i bust
the lust n desire the pain n pleasure
but these is just hurtful to hold it in
my mind draws no words share
im so embarrassed by my self
i cant write any thing great
i cant seem to express my self
im so embarrassed by my self
i cant write any thing great
i cant seem to express my self
the dirty thoughts of love n lust
tell you how i love how we fuck
tell you your bodies a temple
and i just wanna praise it , to
fuck you love you and sex you up
choke you spank you as you cum
these thoughts of mine are to much
i want to let this out before i bust
the lust n desire the pain n pleasure
but these is just hurtful to hold it in
my mind draws no words share
im so embarrassed by my self
i cant write any thing great
i cant seem to express my self
Published 25th Jul 2015
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25th Jul 2015 11:43pm
thank you for that im still working learning . i havent wrote seriously in a few years
so think you for the support and showing the luv. much appreciated.
so think you for the support and showing the luv. much appreciated.
27th Jul 2015 4:00am
Enigmatic Inkling, luv ~ :-*
This poem exudes barely confined, on the verge of exploding, desire so intense and thick one can almost taste it.
There's roughness in its form, yes, but somehow that merely seems to enhance this feeling of almost coming out of one's skin with need, luv... ;-*
Extremely well done conveying this intensity and heated need. ;-*
Whew! I'm gonna need some ice now... ;-*
This poem exudes barely confined, on the verge of exploding, desire so intense and thick one can almost taste it.
There's roughness in its form, yes, but somehow that merely seems to enhance this feeling of almost coming out of one's skin with need, luv... ;-*
Extremely well done conveying this intensity and heated need. ;-*
Whew! I'm gonna need some ice now... ;-*
27th Jul 2015 7:00am
Savaja thank you for your words and comment. this is a rough form .
"desire so intense and thick one can almost taste it" that means a lot
i put what i feel in to what i write and for you to taste these words is unbelievable
thanks alot
"desire so intense and thick one can almost taste it" that means a lot
i put what i feel in to what i write and for you to taste these words is unbelievable
thanks alot
