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My Cheeks Hurt From Smiling
Swaddle me
like a mother
hug me
like no other
let me believe
momentarily
something
else
exists
Sea shells
on a sea floor
become sand
and fade back
into this
empty
shit
Life
I can see you
but what
do you
feel
like?
like a mother
hug me
like no other
let me believe
momentarily
something
else
exists
Sea shells
on a sea floor
become sand
and fade back
into this
empty
shit
Life
I can see you
but what
do you
feel
like?
Published 23rd Jul 2015
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23rd Jul 2015 2:10am
Sibilance througout this is lovely.
I love the general feel of this poem.
It's simplicity and honesty...
I love the general feel of this poem.
It's simplicity and honesty...
23rd Jul 2015 3:04am
Ashes to ashes, but what comes next? Another plane of existence or nothingness? Enjoy being seashell, it may be nothingness... deep imagery! JJ
23rd Jul 2015 3:52pm
wish y'd come x'plore the sand, shells, sea wit what's-left-of-me....
wonderful little poem...succeeds in
stimulating that 'longing'.......oh, dear
wonderful little poem...succeeds in
stimulating that 'longing'.......oh, dear
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Jul 2015 9:11pm
23rd Jul 2015 9:10pm
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26th Jul 2015 7:29pm
28th Jul 2015 3:27pm
still poking people's brains with words, aren't you nikki?
cheerie write!
hope you're doing well :)
cheerie write!
hope you're doing well :)
Anonymous
29th Jul 2015 1:47am
Sweet and bitter at the same time, great last stanza Nikki.
29th Jul 2015 11:44pm
