Just Take Me

Ahhh, JAZZMANOR, luv ~ :-* What a deliciously lovely sensual request you make here! The one so graced is fortunate beyond measure. ;-* This: but a touch of intrigue and fantasy is where something special lives is so incredibly full of truth and those wise enough to realize it and share it can expect rich rewards that ever multiply themselves. And this: So take me to the moon and stars without stepping off the ground taking our dyad step by step enjoying all that can be found is the happy culmination of those rich rewards. Oh, luv, you write it in what is an almost mystical way, showing that quality of intimacy and eroticism within this poem: the mystical nature of it all. Tis beauteous how you've conveyed it. :-*

thanks....music running through made head lead me to "Fly Me To The Moon", towards the end of this write

Ah, Jazz my friend, good piece here man... The last stanza was extra special, though I enjoyed the whole piece immensely man...
"So take me to the moon and stars
without stepping off the ground
taking our dyad step by step
enjoying all that can be found"  The dyad, what a good word to use here, really dig it, adds an extra depth of description here that spoke to me clearly... How are things my friend: wolf

dyad was one of those words used in communication classes often. I try to be original but that word pops up in at least one other poem i have written, so I have to agree about it's usefulness. Things are much busier then I had planned but not in a bad way. Basketball and political activities have taken a larger role...the number one mission was remodeling  and the last part was finished today

intrigue & fantasy: pleasant diversions in love & poetry. quenched in the waterfalls...

yeah you would think with musical artists singing about the dangers of waterfalls I would have gotten the message