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Intertwined Earthquake
The room rumbles as our bodies tumble intertwined together,butt naked, sweat, inferno. My legs over your shoulders,eye contact,my breast on your chest, your manhood on the surface of my pussy, just laying between the lips as our body's get more acquainted. Sliding in slowly but going deeper reaching your limit holding it there as we kiss, sucking on each other's lips, and tongues intertwine, As I bring my thighs together and pump as you thrust full strokes. My pussy tightens more, and more but it's no match when you begin to flex, and spread me wide open,balls slapping, pussy clapping pow!!! Releasing my sweet juices all over you again and again causing you to blast inside me, filling me up full of your love causing a (Intertwined Earthquake)© Jacaima Cooper
Published 18th Jul 2015
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2015 12:23pm
I can feel what you experience as I read, but I would describe it as explicit rather than erotic. There is nothing much to imagine, other than to visualize the experience. It would be nice to feel the emotion and the anticipation as well as the action. I'd love to read your thoughts perhaps, in anticipating a new experience.
18th Jul 2015 2:47pm
I felt it was explicit also but they don't have that category so erotic seemed next best,but I hear you loud and clear. Thanks for the feedback
