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fear of flying
true
she can elate
to the
joy,
euphoria,
of
everyone
else's
happiness
still,
she feels
alone,
even when
someone
professes
love
for her
she can elate
to the
joy,
euphoria,
of
everyone
else's
happiness
still,
she feels
alone,
even when
someone
professes
love
for her
Published 15th Jul 2015
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16th Jul 2015 4:57am
It can become lonely when we cannot believe others love us. We must first love ourselves. Nice write, I felt it. 💋
16th Jul 2015 6:34pm
Thank You calamitygin for the read and thoughtful comments
there is truth in that for sure, but also people can proclaim a lot with words
which are wonderful only if followed with the actions behind them
but glad you could feel where I am coming from
ox
18th Jul 2015 5:36am
This really reeled my heart, made it
sit still in its faint beatings. Powerful,
I know of her. Am teary eyed over
here. Such a reflection.
sit still in its faint beatings. Powerful,
I know of her. Am teary eyed over
here. Such a reflection.
18th Jul 2015 7:07pm
Thank you HowlingWhelms for the read and thoughtful comments
much appreciated
ox
18th Jul 2015 8:03am
18th Jul 2015 7:08pm
13th Aug 2015 3:40pm
honest write. delicate poem with strong message. so me. wary of love for myself. sweet and succinct.
