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Criticklarities - (the best throwaway that ever was throwed)

 
critical mind'o'mine

   critickles
             me no end
             andlessly


      & could critickle you,
      yr delta pussycat too,

as life-of-goodbetterness
            threatens
            so con'stant,
putting
unmitigated presssssssure
            up'on
        all our goodbetter
          critickle'ations
rend
erring'em damnear ineffective
                 defectivities...


Fuckola!  Get me serious for just'a'few
             sec'onds
           & aye'll surely
         justfckn die right
        (right    right)
       where I stand in
    all my under
           stand'ing(hear ye the dingding?)
upstanding
as any standunder
  coulda'woulda(don't fuck wit shoulda)
              done

only the winds wanna blow me ----

way far away



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2015dkzkFOTO:BY:dkzk"SomeoneFuckingSomeoneElseSomehow"
Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
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