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Sliver
It hung there in this morning’s sky,
The sliver of a fading moon.
Dancing naked before the eye,
To share with me her final boon.
Had to pause and appreciate
A beauty by tomorrow gone…
Ponder intricacies of fate—
The things to which we are so drawn.
The morning star barely a glim
Right there next to her majesty.
Amazing how all things seem dim
Compared the light she shines on me.
I’ve felt her tug, I’ve felt her pull…
The passions boiling up within.
I’ve waned with her, but knew her full,
And that, we’ll never share again.
Tomorrow darkness, nothing more.
This moment you are all I view.
My everything that I adore,
If you must go, take me with you.
Published 14th Jul 2015
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14th Jul 2015 3:08am
I'm very partial to every damn gorgeous
line, my edible everloves..
You!.. write the most blushingly romantic
ideals & I can't even pick a fav from the
perfect jewel you have me picturing..
*warm nuzzles to ur warming poetry my sweetie..
mwah
~T
line, my edible everloves..
You!.. write the most blushingly romantic
ideals & I can't even pick a fav from the
perfect jewel you have me picturing..
*warm nuzzles to ur warming poetry my sweetie..
mwah
~T
Always think of you love when the moon catches my attention like it did this morning. The moon's the only thing I've experienced in life capable of giving me a tugging feeling like the one I have always felt with you. Saw you in it this morning. You are the perfect jewel you know. ;)
love you babe.
Michael
love you babe.
Michael
14th Jul 2015 4:37am
and you have me shining in~glow to know you see
me this way my baby.. kissing you so sweetly.
I loves you,
~T
me this way my baby.. kissing you so sweetly.
I loves you,
~T
14th Jul 2015 6:30am
I see you as the Earth casting a great shadow on your lover as she whirls around you to find daylight on the other side of night. Very intriguing imagery in this one!
JJ
JJ
15th Jul 2015 00:31am
Wow J.J. intriguing interpretation as well. thank you for gracing my page and for the comment. :)
Michael
Michael
15th Jul 2015 8:59pm
Oh goodness! This rips the heart out its so beautiful, you're amazing. Lovely & picturesque.
15th Jul 2015 11:21pm
Thank you Noire, for the beautiful compliment. So glad to see you here. :)
Michael
Michael
